navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » OK baby
Open Poetry #49
Post A Reply Post New Topic OK baby Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-09-11 09:05 PM


OK baby
What you want
is what i like,
Your dress is a star,
Your high heels are whistles,
OK baby
Your eyes are lollipops,
Your lips are roses,
I love what you know,
You know what I love,
OK baby
Let's our mouthes roll
Till we forget all the dirt.

© Copyright 2016 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Boomer Styles
Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194
South Side Of Success
1 posted 2016-09-12 12:33 PM


I wonder what it would be like to actually say that to anyone you could call "baby"! I like this very much yann.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-09-12 09:28 AM


Whoa! How'd I miss this! Thanks to Boomer for bringing it to the top. You have all the right words to say to your "baby," she would be unable to resist.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2016-09-12 11:22 AM


thanks boomer, don't know either how this word would be interpretated, all is a question of faith i guess

sincerily


yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2016-09-12 11:24 AM


thanks Jerry for the very comforting and kind words, i would so like that  

sincerily


yann

Elizabeth
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871
Minnesota
5 posted 2016-09-13 01:30 AM


Beautiful....I hope she liked it!
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
6 posted 2016-09-14 01:13 AM


thanks elizateth, would wish too


yann



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2016-10-07 10:18 PM


enjoyed...james
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » OK baby

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary