Open Poetry #49 |
Somewhere |
Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Somwhere, beyond tomorrow, where torrents need no crossing, and mountains need no climbing. Where gentle streams amble by, I will walk with you; ankle -deep in yesterday. Our dreams will be now; troubles passed on through those waters of truth. On gentle, green banks of us we will love without fear. Trust me. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Nice . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ankle -deep in yesterday. Our dreams will be now; so softly whispered in the ear of promise lovely |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sweet! Love it! ~L |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Wow, sweet write. Really enjoyed this, stellar job. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a very romantic promesse, music of a loving heart, yann |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Fresh & dreamy.. enjoyed the read, rainyj |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
A poem for that leaves no question of an undying love, who could ask for more. Cari. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
really nice....james |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Loving someone truly "without fear," is a love that will last forever. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
sounds like the place to be |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautifully done. Gotta love the romance. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Ahhh Shucks Redstart - Now you got me all misty-eyed and I can't find the Kleenex box anywhere. LOL. Pulls the reader in and it's nice work too. Namyh |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I really wanted to comment on this poem. I really like it a lot. Then when I went to comment, I saw I already had. LOL! ~L |
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