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Redstart
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0 posted 2016-08-30 10:42 PM



Somwhere, beyond tomorrow,
where torrents need no crossing,
and mountains need no climbing.
Where gentle streams amble by,
I will walk with you;
ankle -deep in yesterday.
Our dreams will be now;
troubles passed on
through those waters of truth.

On gentle, green banks of us
we will love without fear.
Trust me.

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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-08-31 08:19 AM


Ahhh . . . Nice . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

LeeJ
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2 posted 2016-08-31 11:12 AM


ankle -deep in yesterday.
Our dreams will be now;

so softly whispered in the ear of promise
lovely


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2016-08-31 11:47 AM


Sweet! Love it! ~L
soul drifter
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Colorado
4 posted 2016-08-31 08:14 PM


Wow, sweet write. Really enjoyed this, stellar job.
2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2016-08-31 09:46 PM


a very romantic promesse, music of a loving heart,


yann



rainyday
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Heartland USA
6 posted 2016-09-04 02:08 AM


Fresh & dreamy..

enjoyed the read,
rainyj

Cari
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Englnand
7 posted 2016-09-04 05:36 AM


A poem for that leaves no question of an undying love, who could ask for more.

Cari.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2016-10-27 06:18 PM


really nice....james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
9 posted 2016-10-29 01:01 PM


Loving someone truly "without fear," is a love that will last forever.

...just bein' Bluesy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
10 posted 2016-10-30 03:44 PM


sounds like the place to be
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
11 posted 2016-10-31 08:13 PM


Beautifully done.  Gotta love the romance.  
Namyh
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12 posted 2016-11-03 06:38 PM


Ahhh Shucks Redstart - Now you got me all misty-eyed and I can't find the Kleenex box anywhere. LOL. Pulls the reader in and it's nice work too. Namyh
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
13 posted 2016-11-05 06:34 AM


I really wanted to comment on this poem. I really like it a lot. Then when I went to comment, I saw I already had. LOL! ~L
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