Open Poetry #49 |
Keepining On Keeping On |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
this is not the first time I have been here eh . . . a different body a different time sometimes when my mind is at rest I get flashes of my what went before usually this happens when the moon is blood red we are born death is the next cycle some say there is perfection during loss of life we are reborn through the implosion of the cavity’s nothing located within the mindset it is all created for us with seventh heaven its final goal reincarnation rehabilitates re-birth to carry on, to keep on ©August 28, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Perfection during loss of life is a beautiful thought. life is indeed a journey. Well done JP. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, yes it is, Blues, so good to see you here. Thank you so much. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
I've often pondered the very same. You need to talk to my brother. We've been up too late on too many nights for older men. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah! I hear you on being up so late, Redstart . . . I've mastered the art of going to bed at a somewhat sensible hour, me and my two glasses of cheap California burgundy and my my nightly medication. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-30-2016 05:39 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have many thoughts along these lines Jerry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I also think about it a lot, Ida, thank you for stopping by . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
And with each one you gain a little bit more, for the next time around. Good thoughts here! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thought provoking, and, nothing but the truth...for sure....enjoyed this write/right |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Lee, appreciate your thoughts so much. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Certainly one of the many roads people take to find a reason for living and to discover 'why' they are. The doctrines are endless, like the shelves in a shoe store. We go for style and fit and lose ourselves between the two. So, hopefully we settle for a 'pair' before we tip over. They'll take the shoes off when they slip us into our coffins. Metaphors are like semaphores, 'ya gotta know when 'ta stop. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Ari for your gifted comment. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I have heard that we come back connected to the same people but they play different roles in our life and can be the opposite sex. Imagine that! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Imagine that is right, Lori. I have to believe, we will comeback as someone, either ourselves in another body, or . . . Don't know. When you are discussing "coming back," it is conceivable we could come back as the opposite sex. Why not? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry, Elizabeth, for missing your comment. And you could be exactly right when you say, "gain a little bit more, for the next time around." You betcha! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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