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Open Poetry #49

Being Within Her Dream

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2016-07-22 09:23 PM

when she is pensively dreaming
would that I could observe
wishing I could enter into her world
the one which gives her
the greatest pleasure
I would try to shield her
from the dark ones
which makes her awake to cry
and maybe stroll with her
through lush green meadows
stopping momentarily to pluck a simple
yellow flower
to place in her hair
we stroll on . . .
smelling salt air
from some nearby body of water
she looks so happy inside her dream
would love to present to her
a mojo to protect
her from all that is evil
she is at the center of her dream
I’m not allowed inside
can merely watch from a distance
would that I could be
inside her special inter-space
would that I were the breath she takes
just one quick breath
her breath quickens
understanding I am there
within her dream
she might even feel I was necessary

©July 22, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

1 posted 2016-07-23 12:45 PM

quote:
"would that I could be
inside her special inter-space
would that I were the breath she takes"

With all that "street moxie" of yours Jerry, you and that 'pen' of yours have the heart of a lover.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2016-07-23 08:18 AM

very romantic, you haven't lost your touch. ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2016-07-23 08:21 AM

Thank you Ari, appreciate your thoughts.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2016-07-23 08:23 AM

Good to see you here, Lori . . . Yeah, sometimes the subject matter overwhelms me, thank you for your kind words.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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