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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2016-07-16 01:00 PM

     Some Days

     some days there are tears
     others
     I am mad as hell
     on another
     I just want to forget
     but we never can
     of those we knew
     the one's dear
     the one's lost



     Helen 041857 - 071613






     ©krawdad

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2016-07-16 01:22 PM

Your grief is raw and unrelenting in this piece. Love has no greater tribute. ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-07-16 02:29 PM

I can relate, Krawdad, absolutely! Nice ink.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

3 posted 2016-07-18 04:33 PM

That's so true.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2016-07-19 04:50 PM

Conflicting emotions...I like to think we are a better person to have crossed paths in some small way. Along the same lines, better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2016-07-19 05:11 PM

"I just want to forget
but we never can"

Excellent write, this line often felt, but never had the words to express that emotion.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2016-07-24 03:25 AM

So very true, Krawdad.

Ida

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

7 posted 2016-07-24 04:35 PM

quote:
"I like to think we are a better person to have crossed paths in some small way. Along the same lines, better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all"

I like this reply to you as much as your poetry Krawdad. It's more than cliche', and it always has been.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2016-07-25 10:25 PM

Always hard to lose someone we loved or cared for...james

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