Needs that i look about myself ( dedicated to Lewis Carroll)

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Open Poetry #49

Needs that i look about myself ( dedicated to Lewis Carroll)

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-06-04 05:12 PM

The sea is blue, I see her pink,
Needs that I look after myself.

This girl ignores me, I am senile there,
Needs that I look after myself.

New York dreams, I speak Chinese,
Needs that I look after myself

People are grunchy rhinoceros, They have horns,
Needs that I look after myself.

The grass is green, I see her green,
Needs that I look after myself,

The earth is feminine, She speaks all the time,
Needs that I look after myself.

One and one make a I believe that it is two,
Needs that I look after myself.

The snow is cheerful, It melts me,
Needs that I look after myself.

The girls are attractive, I believe that I like them,
Needs that I look after myself.

I like the soccer, Them run behind a ball,
Needs that I look after myself.

People think, I think that they think,
Needs that I look after myself.

The sky is red, The lipstick also,
Needs that I look after myself.

I write poetry, my magnolia tree too,
Needs that I look after myself,
and you ?

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2016-06-05 08:24 PM

A poet's thoughts are always magical yann.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2016-06-06 05:21 PM

Thanks Ida, this poem as supposed to be Humoristic, in the french version it was not dedicated to Lewis Caroll

have a nice day

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-06-07 11:37 PM

nice...it seems like the world rotates around pretty girls or woman; let one walk down the street and the men are alive...james

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2016-06-13 08:56 AM

so true james, nice to read your pertinent comment,

yann

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