Open Poetry #49 |
Names of Lovers |
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Names of lovers Nothing is as precious to hear than your name whispered softly to your ear. To hear the words "I love you" followed by your name is sweet nectar mixed with petals of roses Words like Honey, Sweetie or Doll are words meant for anyone. but the name of the one you love is sacred to the heart of lovers. Jo Perry |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so true..just the thought warms my heart. Love is sweet. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely Jo! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
So very true, the memory of it sends little tingles up my back. Well observed and so well written. Enjoyed this. Thanks. Pete |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you three.I really hesitated to post this as I did it off the top of my head just remembering a time. LOL Jo |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
What can I say.."I love you Jo" for posting |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ha, a nicely whispered answer. I whisper "thank you" jote. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so true and beautiful, and it is needed every time by everyone, you made us hear this words yann |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Yann. I was remembering some thing from the past and indeed it is something all lovers should remember. Best to you ,.Jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Yann for stopping by and leaving me a message.JO |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! This is very nice. Easy on the mind and on ones heart, for sure. Nice read. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you JL. Old ladies have long memories and have learned a lot along the way. We must share the way. best to you, JO |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sweet thoughts Jo. Ida |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Wisdom of a lifetime of love in so few words. You can't just write like this if you're just a 'writer'. It's a powerful introduction for many of the young ones on the expression of love, true, meaningful lasting love. I would marry a gal like you in a heartbeat, but I suppose someone else... More feelings and fewer words please |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
thank you Ida.I am sure you understand my feelings. Ari Squire. What a sweet thing to say.Thank you very much. JO |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
really liked the last two lines...james |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
You are most welcome my dear. Ari More feelings and fewer words please |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Latearrival - You did real good with this one jo and I loved the craft of your words. They tend to stay with ya and that's poetic. Namyh, a fan. [This message has been edited by Namyh (06-09-2016 08:38 AM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you James Michael and Namyth, Iam so pleased that you think my words were written well. Best to you , Jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Namyth.Thank you so much.You flatter me and it feels good jo, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very true! And nothing's more devastating than hearing a name and it not be yours. Enjoyed this very much, Jo! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Suthern.I am u sure you follow my drift. JO |
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