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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-06-01 11:06 AM




"J'accuse

Night provides the stage
Broken skies through window glass
Stab of lightening chains
At the next drum roll the curtains open
Let the nightmare commence
~
Eyelids flutter
I hear her now
Scuttling crabwise
Across the halls of darkness
The silver spider begins to spin her web
~
Sugar iced mountains reach to touch the stars
A Curlew’s cry echoes across the wetlands
The green fog fades and clears
My lady sips her camomile tea
And ponders on better days
~
On the dust road
Passing figures cast no shadows
In her torn dress she is waiting
Blood rivulets trickle and drip
"J'accuse, "J'accuse
~
A thousand Harpies inhabit my brain
Picking over the strands memory
To find the masking terror
Mouthing a silent scream
I struggle towards the light
~
Up through the spent years
Slipping on my misdeeds
A foothold here and there
Provided by your love
Closer now
~
The candyfloss of silken threads
Tear and fall
I hear the strains of a half remembered melody
Somewhere in the swirling time mists
Elvis sings again

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2016-06-01 04:53 PM


very interesting and powerful, il loved the ending with Elvis like a solacing mlofy after the turmoil
J'accuse was the title of the newspaper L'aurore in the case of lOuis Freyfuss, a jewish officer of the french army who was destitued , it was written by Emile Zola...
Thanks for your surprising and subtle poem

Cari
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Englnand
2 posted 2016-06-01 05:46 PM


Thank you for your comment on this piece and thank you again on recognizing the use of "J'accuse in the poem. It refers to recurring dreams that many ex-service men have so it’s nothing unique. In the dream the woman is always there, but as to why I have no explanation as I have never harmed any female. Thankfully the nightmare fades over the years.

Cari.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2016-06-07 11:41 PM


very intense...james
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