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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2016-04-14 09:49 PM


   Love, Light, and Spring

Love is the finest dream and
Light the greatest teacher ...
dew-shimmering wildflowers
   in the early dawn;
willows in the warmth of a
  rose-colored sunset;
Cherry and dogwood
silhouettes lined by the
emergent twilight against
a star-field, moonlit
   tapestry ...
all so finely etched in
the grand-eternal book of
Spring and our loveliest
memories of the ethereal,
boundless magic of light
   and love.

              --- b. e. adams (4/14/2016)


© Copyright 2016 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-04-14 10:13 PM


You had some marvelous lines in this poetical endeavor, Bruce. In fact, I believe the entire poem was marvelous. Loved it!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2016-04-14 10:53 PM


Thanks JP !!
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2016-04-18 02:26 AM


Me too Bruce, So pretty.

                 Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2016-04-18 04:33 AM


Thanks Ida !
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5 posted 2016-04-18 04:48 AM


Enchanting, dear Bruce.

Margherita

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(Rumi)

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2016-04-18 09:38 AM


thanks, Margherita!
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