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Open Poetry #49

Precious Thoughts

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-04-14 12:05 PM

Precious Thoughts

In the evening
as the sun drops from my view
I welcome the coolness
of the night
and I find myself
observing the stars and the moon,
and thinking precious thoughts of you,
these thoughts going through my imagination
as if it is a playground
where my mind runs freely
and enjoys the essence of you,
knowing I will see you soon
and sure enough, soon enough
you will be in my presence
and I in yours
enjoying you
in all of your
radiant beauty.

JamesLee
4/13/16

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2016-04-14 11:40 AM

Wonderful feelings of anticipation, dear James. A dreamlike moment that runs towards reality.

Lovely.

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2016-04-15 12:04 PM

"where my mind runs freely
and enjoys the essence of you,"

these lines capture the essence of what love is between two beings. Very deep feelings here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-04-18 09:36 PM

Thank you Margherita and jjote for the nice response...james

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