Open Poetry #49 |
Roots |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
You ask me who you are And where do you come from You ask me please to tell you Where do you belong ~ The threads of all the lives we led Will help you understand The strings that tie and hold us forever to this land ~ Through the pain of labour The boy child that you bore Did he live to draw the bow On the field of Agincourt? ~ Did you walk beside me Along the Pilgrims Way Footsore tired and weary On that far off summers day? ~ Breasting the hill at Harbledown To see Canterbury’s sunlit spires Tasting the tang of wood smoke From the charcoal burners fires ~ When you fell in love with Mary Did I marry Abigail And did we leave them grieving In the mud of Passendale? ~ For our genes are joined and tangled In the roots of every tree Which bind this earth together To make a home for you and me * * * Battle of Passendale World War 1. Rain and shellfire turned the mud into a quicksand; thousands of British soldiers were killed there. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . On every battlefield, Cari, war is horrendous. Still war seems to be the way with mankind. Will it ever end? No, I fear it will not. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A "war" poem wrote with the skill of the better WW1 poets.. An era of poetry that I hold particular fondness for. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
but, of course a poem about a different war.. 1415 instead of 1917...but they all blemd the same, only names and places change.. what I meant was , this poem stands wth the poems of the war to end all wars...yea, right! |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Yes of course the poem does relate to war but also to a thread of the different lives we have led. I’m a profound sceptic and I am not referring to having been Napoleon or Ann Boleyn in a previous life or the hypnotic regression rubbish but when something personally happens to you that you can find no other logical explanation for, you start to wonder. I can’t remember if I have referred to my experience before in the forum so I don’t want to repeat it here but if I haven’t, I will be happy to tell if you want me too. Thank you my friends for your kind comments. Cari. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing about a sad situation...james |
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