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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-04-10 05:42 AM




You ask me who you are
And where do you come from
You ask me please to tell you
Where do you belong
~
The threads of all the lives we led
Will help you understand
The strings that tie
and hold us forever to this land
~
Through the pain of labour
The boy child that you bore
Did he live to draw the bow
On the field of Agincourt?
~
Did you walk beside me
Along the Pilgrims Way
Footsore tired and weary
On that far off summers day?
~
Breasting the hill at Harbledown
To see Canterbury’s sunlit spires
Tasting the tang of wood smoke
From the charcoal burners fires
~
When you fell in love with Mary
Did I marry Abigail
And did we leave them grieving
In the mud of Passendale?
~
For our genes are joined and tangled
In the roots of every tree
Which bind this earth together
To make a home for you and me
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Battle of Passendale World War 1. Rain and shellfire turned the mud into a quicksand; thousands of British soldiers were killed there.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-04-10 09:48 AM


Eh . . . On every battlefield, Cari, war is horrendous.
Still war seems to be the way with mankind.
Will it ever end? No, I fear it will not.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2016-04-10 10:32 AM


A "war" poem wrote with the skill of the better WW1 poets..

An era of poetry that I hold particular fondness for.


ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2016-04-11 04:58 PM


but, of course a poem about a different war..

1415 instead of 1917...but they all blemd the same, only names and places change..

what I meant was , this poem stands wth the poems of the war to end all wars...yea, right!


Cari
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Posts 411
Englnand
4 posted 2016-04-11 07:38 PM


Yes of course the poem does relate to war but also to a thread of the different lives we have led.
I’m a profound sceptic and I am not referring to having been Napoleon or Ann Boleyn in a previous life or the hypnotic regression rubbish but when something personally happens to you that you can find no other logical explanation for, you start to wonder.
I can’t remember if I have referred to my experience before in the forum so I don’t want to repeat it here but if I haven’t, I will be happy to tell if you want me too.

Thank you my friends for your kind comments.

Cari.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2016-04-13 11:47 PM


nice writing about a sad situation...james
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