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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
a sign in the heavens I read as my own believing all good works prevail while my fruit bearing efforts fell short of the task everyone knew I would fail |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Stacy, the main thing is to keep trying. Especially when you're trying to do good things. Besides, these everyone people don't always know everything....if that makes any sense?? Nice little melancholy piece here. I enjoyed the read. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When, at once you fail . . . Keep on keeping on. It'll come, it'll come. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Lots of power in such a short, simple set of lines. This is my favorite kind of writing. I think people underestimate the brilliance of how so much gets stuffed into a single breath. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Thank you Eric and Jerrypat for your encouragement! Thank you XG for your sweet reply! I very much thank you all! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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