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Open Poetry #49

Flaming - haiku

MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

0 posted 2016-03-12 12:52 PM

"He wI'll lead you safely through all things:
And when you cannot stand it, He will bury
you in his arms"
St.Francis deSales

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-03-12 01:21 PM

Wild is this "flaming" one . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2016-03-12 04:28 PM

There's always hope for improvement in every situation.
Gotta love those flaming sunrises.

Great Pic!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

3 posted 2016-03-12 05:06 PM

Jerry, these are true words and the picture was taken of the sunrise over the farm behind our home! Thank you for dropping by and responding.

hugs, Marti

"He wI'll lead you safely through all things:
And when you cannot stand it, He will bury
you in his arms"
St.Francis deSales

MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

4 posted 2016-03-12 05:50 PM

Eric, thank you for reading and responding to my little haiku! I love writing them and fining or taking pictures to go with them!

Hugz, Marti

"He wI'll lead you safely through all things:
And when you cannot stand it, He will bury
you in his arms"
St.Francis deSales

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2016-03-15 02:40 PM

This form is a difficult one for me to write - capturing thoughts and emotions into a tight 3-line verse - you make it seem effortless. Great pic too..

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

6 posted 2016-03-17 06:57 PM

Powerful.

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