Open Poetry #49 |
Springtime in Suburbia |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Springtime in Suburbia Acacia Avenue Mock Tudor boxes Cloned for conformity In red brick reserve ~ Regimented daffodils Yellow trumpet nodding To friends and family Over chess board drives ~ Morning rituals Ecclesiastic sponging of Sunday standing Volvos Thirty percent down and five years to pay ~ Dosing cats, needle teeth yawning Restless dogs, boredom barking Rumble of mowers, panzer rolling Across green sculptured lawns ~ Elsie Parker, avoids the mirror Searches for comfort chocolate Sighs for the might have been Behind closed doors ~ Teenage soldier dressed for action Designer jeans, margarine hair Pockets the cell phone, grins at the promise of lunchtime larger and the everyday girls * * * Author note. A word of explanation on the use of the word ‘reserve’. The meaning in the context of the poem is for the English wish for privatesy i.e. ‘Don’t invade my space unless you are invited to’. A visitor to our country will at some stage encounter this middle class attitude to strangers. We don’t make eye contact and smile at passing people in the street, it’s a cultural thing. |
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent work, as I knew it would be... "Dosing cats, needle teeth yawning Restless dogs, boredom barking Rumble of mowers, panzer rolling Across green sculptured lawns' Yes, the "panzers" will start to roll here soon.. In this land of "little boxes, all made out of ticky tacky And they all look the same." Note: I am glad your read my March poem, and also glad you posted this one.. 'Tis the season for such--bring them on. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, Cari, you do know a few things about putting your words together and making them count. I had learned the description the English give to "reserve," quite a few years ago. I did not learn it in class, but from a classy lady named Christina. I absolutely loved this new poem of yours, somehow, you always seem to give of yourself within the lines. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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