Open Poetry #49 |
A dream that sought solace. |
whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
The weary sun tip toed through crochet clouds To darn lace curtains with golden needles, And to sign its name on criss-crossed trickling waters Making shadows bow down low in obituaries Of another fading day, and on distant Wandering memories, a lark faintly sang As she settled on the meadows of her birth. Between the twilight’s whispered conversations The censer of peace sprinkledserenity, As somewhere beneath the old stone bridge A song thrush drank from a stream of dreams In the newborn night, and it felt wrapped In it’s own silence, as the only sound around Was the forest breathing through the hours of shade. And a dream paused in a sense of what was missing To make its silken instances come true, As just across the stream a cottage’s lights still glimmered With so many subtle expectations held inside Where she waited for her dream to come and find her As she softly strolled through satin sprinkled sleep With such a sense of déjà vu upon her moon touched pillow. And then her dream came tip toeing through her open window Riding on an errant wandering star, to wait in a hushed corner Of her bedroom, until she wandered further into the depths of sleep, And on the midnight hour, she entered into her dream, and all at once Her face was dressed in a beautiful smile, as her dream caresses Held her heart and soul, until the rising dawn peeped through Her fluttering voile curtains, and tickled her awake with the sun… |
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The last stanza is perfection. The poem overall is a beautiful painting...well done. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your imagery put me in mind of an intricate watercolor-loved it ~L |
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