Open Poetry #49 |
The man who drew dreams with his ebony cane. |
whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
The day seemed to start in an old fashioned way With arguments, laughter and children at play, The only thing different and wholly unplanned Was the man on the beach who drew dreams in the sand, He looked different some way, as though not of this time And his pen was a silver topped cane of life’s rhyme, That drew imaged cartouches and scrolls of the day Yet the incoming tides washed them slowly away. From pink dawn to deep twilight he wandered the shore And he always found places that he could explore, Where the gold parchment sand was untouched by the sea Where his writings were safe and his soul would be free, He would write without nought but the words in his heart Until all of life’s daydreams had drifted apart, When the twilight was lost in the heart of night’s shade And his cane drew Amen’s to the prayers it had made. The man walked through midnight, his cane dragged behind As he thought of what dreams in the morning he’d find, And he looked out to sea with the moon in his eyes While he thought of the many ways life laughs and cries, Then he savoured the dawn as it crept into view While he sorted his dreams from the false to the true, And he wiped off his cane as he strolled up the beach For his cane’s written night dreams were not out of reach… |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love this. I love this, but don't believe I can give a credible review of it. I understand that he drew lines and stories in the sand, only to have them wash away with the incoming tide. Me thinks those lines in the sand represented his life, whereas the human incoming tide of his desires, his loves, kept the man at a standstill. Still, toward the end he kept on keeping on with his dreams and the conceivable love of his life, until his “silver topped cane” seemed to urge him to not quit the fight. So he took consul with the can and when he did, he realized that the “written night dreams were not out of reach….” Uh, did I say I loved this poem? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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