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Beachy Feet
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Feet in brine Horizon racing sunlight To peek at my toes It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
This is a scene I can really go for Miss View! An imaginative stroke of your pen! 88's and a bottle of Coppertone!  She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful, dear Stacy Lynn! Love, Margherita  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gotta watch that darned old peek-a-boo sun, don'ja know? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Thanks TF, Margherita and Jerrypat! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I like the feel, and texture of this one on my brain....:-) Visuals-well done |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Lol, seems your beach walks have been much more pleasant than mine of late. Oes curling at the thought of the cold water... (CA beaches anyway). Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading...james |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Thank you so much ice, Michael and James! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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