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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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Wyoming USA

0 posted 2016-01-05 09:40 PM


You ask if I want to?
And the answer is undoubtably Yes!

Yes I want to lay with you
Under the stars, with you in my arms
Comforting, caressing winds
Dancing perennials, springs scents
In redolence bliss

Kissing with you, passionate as we do
Leaves breathless seconds between our lips
Embracing with fingertips upon succulent skin
Draws me closer to your hearts inspiration
Feeling your tenderness thru your trembling response
Your fears dampened as our eyes fall into one
This is the moment, moments are built upon

© Copyright 2016 Richard Konkler - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2016-01-05 10:33 PM


So very passionate, and your ending was perfect!

Pretty poetry, gotta love the romance.

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
2 posted 2016-01-06 02:13 PM


Thank you BluesSeranade. It is much appreciated. I'm just now getting back into writing. I've always went towards romance. New inspirations and better visions hopefully can open new doors to expression

Rich

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2016-01-06 03:45 PM


Very nice romantic poem, Rich.

Great that the muse is back to inspire you.



Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-01-07 09:32 PM


nice...james
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