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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-31 12:50 PM




She sleeps now
Innocence in miniature
Pink purity on the web of life
Safe harboured on comfort breasts
Protection from unwanted dreams
~
We look with wonder,
Across the stepping stones of time
So many paths from which to choose
So many hearts to break and capture
Together, we share a smile.

A little poem for our fourth daughter.

© Copyright 2015 Cari - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2015-12-31 01:04 PM


What a sweet  verse to give to your new daughter.
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-31 02:51 PM


. . . and I am certain she will break many, many hearts!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2015-12-31 04:43 PM


Wish you well, my friends - hug her for me too!!


j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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4 posted 2015-12-31 05:52 PM


How perfect and befitting a gift! The poem is precious as I am sure your daughter is as well! ~L
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2016-01-07 04:54 PM


BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2016-01-07 06:08 PM


Sorry. .I have no idea what just happened with my reply
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2016-01-07 06:09 PM


Sorry. .I have no idea what just happened with my reply
DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
8 posted 2016-01-08 12:52 PM


4 girls sounds like a lot of fun going on at your house! I only have a brother and I always wanted a sister, but my brother is a good guy too. I'm very happy for you Cari and I think you write awesome poetry!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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