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Open Poetry #49

promises for you

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-01-04 12:25 PM

a peaceful silence
one void of death and sorrows
one filled with the promise
of wonderful tomorrows
pulling you close to me
from your raging waters of despondency
and those gale-force winds of loneliness

on those winds of change
do your clouds of sorrows fly
changing you with my slightest breeze
and making you feel
like you've been swept
up by a hurricane

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2016-01-04 01:32 AM

"Peaceful silence". Nothing affects our mood in a more positive way than peaceful silence.

It's a great promise, dear Stacy Lynn. Let that healing breeze do its magic.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-01-04 11:43 AM

I hear you DV. "clouds of sorrows" and a "hurricane" is a good way to put it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2016-01-04 12:55 PM

Easy breezy poem with lots of good thoughts to ponder.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2016-01-05 08:14 PM

this is nice...james

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

5 posted 2016-01-05 08:51 PM

Thanks everyone!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

6 posted 2016-01-05 09:44 PM

I really enjoyed this, love the ending!

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