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True Love |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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True Love Beyond the ever-restless winds of Autumn passing, lies a Wintry world of relentless sorrows, infinite longings, and saddest memories, without color or purpose; yet true love is the light to dispels all such darkness, and talk against Time, never vanishing as smoke to an empty sky. --- b. e. adams (12/25/2015) Happy Christmas everyone !! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cool write, Bruce. Much depth within! Merry Christmas to you . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
quote:It certainly is SHDP, and you expressed quite clearly. 88's friend  She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Great descriptive write! Very much enjoyed! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks so much to each of you for commenting on this 'write!' ... Happy Christmas !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful poem Bruce. Haven't been on the sight for a while due to some health issues. Got out of the hospital just in time for Christmas. Wishing you a Nerry Christmas. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful poem Bruce. Haven't been on the site much due to some health issues. Got out of the hospital just in time for Christmas. Just want to wish you a Merry Christmas. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Ida, I'm very sorry, of course, to hear of your health issues! Thank you for your lovely comments about my latest lil' "poetic scribbles!" ... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Merry Christmas to you too, dear Bruce. This is another masterful write of yours and I do hope that you succeeded in dispelling the darkness of sad thoughts as you affirm in this poem. Love and peace. Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Margherita! For me, Dec. 26th. is perhaps the 'worst day of the year' ... 'cause the nebulous 'magic' of Christmas has vanished once again (and all 'loss' and 'darkness' of the human condition seems most keenly felt) ... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading this...james |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
This is the most pretty poem I've read! You must have the girls swooning! Billy says a lot of sweet things but he says he can't write things like poems and love stories. He kinda turns red when we talk about it! He likes to hunt with friends and his dad right now. It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks so much to each of you for commenting on this lil' "poetic scribble!" Actually, I had a lady tell me "since you can't eat it or bank it, the 'poetry' is nothing but a silly waste of time!" ... most Americans in particular apparently detest poetry, so certainly no one is 'swooning!' |
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