Open Poetry #49 |
What do you see Poet |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
I see an apple crisp morning Tumbledown fields, buttercup bright Falling to the water meadows on Beaulieu River I reach for a pen dipped in the well of legend Lifting the veil to take me where I wish to go Where a pinafore Alice skips through the fern grass Searching the hedgerows for the White Rabbit In the hush of evening I hear hoof falls of fantasy beating on the dust road Over the Malvern's hills and down to Middle Earth I hear the wild wind crying shrill down the chimney piece Run for comfort to the skirts of mother love I see a caravan of pack horses laden with brandy barrels Hear the jingle of harness, the call of the Night Riders ‘Watch the wall my darling while the gentlemen pass by’ I see a downy glade deep in the woodland Where small winged creatures dance in the starlight Where Oberon and Titania hold court under the peeping moon What do you see Poet? I see a long ago England. Please note: ‘Watch the wall my darling while the gentlemen pass by’ is a direct quote from Rudyard Kipling’s A Smugglers Song |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . And as your eyes were seeing all that which took place in "long ago England.," you were smelling the smells of stout ale served up from a wooden cask in a very noisy pub which catered to all the greats you have seen, and you felt completely at home. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful imagery you've left in my mind. Felt whisked away to another age through your words. Love the way you've worked this around Kipling's line. Poetry that inspires poetry is a beautiful thing. Michael |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this very nice post. Jo |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
What I see in this.... I see a highwayman, riding...searching for Bess... I see William Blake finding the world in a grain of sand... I see Wordsworth climbing the old stairs of Tintern... I see Shelly running off with the bride of Frankenstein... And, I see the son of them ( never mind biology) carrying on the discription of the world through poetry.. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent !! |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
such nice poetry! I see many things I like all the time but I can't write about them like you do. You must be smart in school I bet! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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