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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-12-23 06:54 AM


       New Love

When above this
ever-suffering world
there is only fading
starlight and a few
motionless clouds
tipped in vanishing
  moonlight,
the mind fills with
dark and random
  thoughts
of all things passing
and the heart becomes
  an empty vessel;
yet in these moments
of perfect silence,
just before the gentle
  dawn,
hopes and dreams
    of new love
become the morning
   star.

          --- b. e. adams (12/23/2015)



© Copyright 2015 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-12-23 09:24 AM


THIS is good, Bruce . . .

~ Do what you have to do to feel right,
I'll do my best to be alright. ~

Margherita
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2 posted 2015-12-23 09:27 AM


Just so, lovely visions, Bruce!

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2015-12-23 09:45 AM


As always ... many thanks, JP and Margherita!
latearrival
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4 posted 2015-12-23 10:00 AM


Bruce, Yes there is always hope. Do open that large heart of yours and seek and you will certainly find the one with whom to share.May your Christmas be bright with and open to love. Jo
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2015-12-23 01:04 PM


Thank you, Jo. for the most kind Christmas thoughts !

Happy Christmas to you !

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2015-12-26 03:14 AM


Your romantic poetry is the best, Bruce.
                            Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2015-12-26 05:09 AM


Thank you, Ida !!
katahdin
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8 posted 2015-12-26 05:20 AM


WONDERFUL !!
Kat >^..^<

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2015-12-26 02:46 PM


thank you, Kat !
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2015-12-30 11:11 PM


this is nice...james
DaysofView
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11 posted 2015-12-31 12:00 PM


very pretty poem secondhanddreampoet, but you sure have a long name. Do you mind if I don't use it alot?

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

secondhanddreampoet
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12 posted 2015-12-31 04:24 AM


you'd be most welcome to use my real name: which is Bruce!

(thanks for commenting on this ever-so-humble  
   lil' 'poetic scribble!'

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