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Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-12-17 12:26 PM


sail on a sea of stone icons
swim among snails in the sands

search for salvation in bedlam
see peace in the palm of your hand

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

© Copyright 2015 Danny - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-12-17 12:30 PM


Way cool Tf!
"...peace in the palm of your hand" is a gem!
~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-17 12:57 PM


Short and sweet / Revelation no doubt!

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2015-12-17 02:26 PM


Impressive, Danny! It's great when inspiration "hits" us here.


Margherita

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line
4 posted 2015-12-18 01:05 AM


Your poetry runs on its own Mr. Fingers, without any aid from me. Thank you however, for your considerate recognition.  

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
5 posted 2015-12-18 01:46 PM


Thank you all so much!

...and you Mr. Martini For not being upset. I consider you a dangerous man!


88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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