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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-16 07:38 AM





Sylvia Hope of sixteen summers
Dreaming of her earmarked lover
Smiling from a cuddled pillow
Wriggles her toes in sweet recall
~
Boothby wakes from boozy slumbers
Greets the morning with a curse
Children stirring, urgent whispers
‘Oh wake up do, its Christmas day'
~
Brush aside the Chintzy curtains
See the wispy haired old vicar
Scratching out a Christmas sermon
Redundant morals from a cross nibbed pen
~
A hesitant sun rims the Downlands
Where the big house chimneys pencil the sky
Cows from the high fields wander down for milking
As the bells from St Peters ring out the rounds

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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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1 posted 2015-12-16 08:17 AM


Really enjoying your poetry...

I always look for that perfect line...

"Redundant morals from a cross nibbed pen"

oooops!, there it is......:-)

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-16 08:45 AM


Christmas day is different for many people, as you so well pointed out in the well-constructed poem, Cari.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

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