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A Forest of Proclivity
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A Forest of Proclivity |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line 
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An anomalous mist In a forest of proclivity A stark reminder Of towering meadows And sunken mountains That placed my wishes Alongside my ambitions In an effort to borne Of them twins Yet of them today lay Distinctions of yesterday That are lost in... An anomalous mist In a forest of proclivity Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, Mr. Martini, what fantastic imagery ... "towering meadows and sunken mountains" ... I am captivated by your refined writing and I always find the opportunity to learn new words to store in my English vocabulary. Thank you for that! Ok, and now let the fresh morning breeze disperse the mist of this forest of proclivity! Exquisite! Margherita  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kind Sir, Margherita and I are forming a fan club! Thank you for my new favorite word, proclivity. ~L |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Proclivity, and anomaly are the two things that make a person unique...sticking strictly to each makes the person pretty boring...together they make a person interesting.. Well done MM "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . You are scoring big, Mr Martini, and I understand why, as simple wording as this beauty of a poem is, it is deep and very unique. ~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~ |
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