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Haiku Chain.. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA 
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Haiku-Chain.. Everyone welcome to play along. Using the Last line of previous Haiku as the First line of your new Haiku. Snow covered cabin, Poems cured warm in chimney smoke, Writing hideaway |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Writing hideaway but not so very well hid kids and dogs converge ~ My inner world is my paradise and i am its keeper ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
kids and dogs converge on a snow pile deep and white Laughter fills the air |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Laughter fills the air With the sound of bright colors Like flowers in May "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Like flowers in May sun worshipers dot the beach, clouds crash the party |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Clouds crash the party Outside the mountain cabin Snowflakes sift like sand This is fun rainy-j I have done this type of thing before in a Renga group. Instead of Haiku, you do Tanka. The first person writes a 5-7-5, Haiku, the next does a 7-7 answering couplet. Thanks for the fun [This message has been edited by ice (12-02-2015 06:09 PM).] |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Snowflakes sift like sand into the shade of shadows fading at sunrise |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
fading at sunrise fingers tickled to the bone bride and grooms first day She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Bride and grooms first day, is nothing yet annoying? just give it time love |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Just give it time love But first moments are not real For now, lust heals all |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
For now, lust heals all coyotes wail in the night mere moon worshipers |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
mere moon worshipers monikers etched in limestone freedoms finale She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Freedom's finale, decisions, always the two edged sword. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
the two-edged sword one for soul, one for spirit beheaded at birth She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Beheaded at birth my house is ajar filled with spirits |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Filled with spirits (4) Foot tapping on a brass rail Tuning her 'Gee' string Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Tuning her 'Gee' string a therapeutic hobby, idle hands, devils workshop |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
"Somethings' happening here...and what it is ain't exactly clear" (Buffalo Springfield 'For What It's Worth') Ok, one is 4-7-5 and the last one is 5-7-7. I admit I don't know 'Haiku' or Senyru' from a suppository, but I'm going with a 5-7-5 and if you want to make something of it, meet me in the parking lot at 6! (If I'm not there, start without me  )devil's workshop blues plays in stereophonic shades my tortured eyes She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Sorry, my mistake |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
S'ok. Since its no busier around here than I am at the moment, I'll weave another. shades my tortured eyes with the softness of her hand singing me to sleep She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
singing me to sleep window open in April chorus of peepers "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Singing me to sleep misheard syllables of rain, kisses from the past. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Kisses from the past Forgotten love notes Carved along the shore Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
carved along the shore formations of past lovers never thinking twice She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Never thinking twice Prize money motivation Kisses on canvas Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
kisses on canvass a prelude of things to come let's have the real thing It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
let's have the real thing no more painting by number drenched in finest oils One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
drenched in finest oils failed to re-install drain plug Valvoline shampoo She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Valvoline shampoo Spiked my hair with a dipstick Head is a quart low Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
head a quart low a metaphor for the mind when there is no mind She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
when there is no mind your a little like my billy sometimes an A plus It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Sometimes an A plus is scored by my preschoolers, they teach the teacher |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
They teach the teacher Those little ones with big smiles Lessons from the heart Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
kisses on canvas portrait of lover's embrace encircled by gilt |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Encircled by gilt In a bubble of passion Both knowing it's wrong "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
both knowing its wrong they killed innocent people San Bernardino [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (12-12-2015 10:39 AM).] |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
San Bernardino heading East to the desert two girls and their thumbs She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
two girls and their thumbs hitching a ride to Vegas you bet your behind! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
you bet your behind when your pockets are empty not a friend in sight She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
not a friend in sight on this cold and rainy night crying in my beer |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Crying in my beer Like what it was for old Hank As 'Luke the Drifter' One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
As Luke the Drifter Hank played his part perfectly For so little time Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
for so little time all we have is each other just keep holding on |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just keep holding on happiness is bound to win eat sun sparks for lunch |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
eat sun sparks for lunch wrapped like a hot tamale pushing through a smile She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Pushing through a smile my heart song beguiles your ears dizziness blinds you |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Dizziness blinds you I thwart equilibrium, I'm a real bad girl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I'm a real bad girl angel eyes lead you astray keep away from fire |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
keep away from fire? dance only in the moonlight? Love is always both! --- b. e. adams (12/13/2015) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love is always both: whispers and sighs of passion total involvement |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
total involvement spirit and body are one mantra of the mind She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Mantra of the mind Self-centering of being A balancing act Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
A balancing act Yours and mine will co-existence see its so easy ~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
See its so easy Performed it as a young man With torches to burn Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
with torches to burn handing them to the village they want the monster |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
They want the monster from a thousand nights of snow to wake to sun's shine |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
to wake to sun's shine seeing tall corn in the field morning's first embrace She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Morning's first embrace: all drops of dew hold rainbows nature blesses men |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
nature blesses men with delicate plum blossums as soft as her skin "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
as soft as her skin radiant and inviting daring not to blink She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
daring not to blink and miss stars streak the night sky Meteor shower |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Meteor shower: summer night bliss for lovers magical moments |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Magical moments Entwined in a lovers' arms Promising nothing Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
promising nothing but giving everything that is true freedom |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
That is true freedom Once green leaves,colored fire Ashes falling down |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ashes falling down Really surreal covering Between this and that ~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Between this and that an increment of neither a bit of nothing |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
a bit of nothing yielding a horse from nowhere singing "Happy Trails" She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
singing "Happy Trails" Dale Evans and Roy Rogers ride off together |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
ride off together can-dancing honeymooners * "Unchained Melody" * Music: Alex North Lyrics: Hy Zaret She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Unchained melody: universe sings of deep love plunge into vastness |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Plunge into vastness through a marmalade sunset, so content are we |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
so content are we in front of the roaring fire let the cold winds blow |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Let the cold winds blow Nestled beneath my warm shield No harm comes to you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No harm comes to you: rock yourself in divine trust angels walk with you |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
angels walk with you along trails of lost footings where you may lose yours She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Where you may lose yours Is where the Tao is named The way has no voice "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." Carl Sandburg |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
the way has no voice it moves as the shapeless wind still beneath the waves She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Still beneath the waves lie fear and indecision, the tide brings freedom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The tide brings freedom: naked I stand at the shore come to me now love |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
come to me now love and open your heart to me so I may fill it |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
so I may fill it foxy pharmacist replied lovesick prescription She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
lovesick prescription take two she said with a wink I'll get you a drink |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
I'll get you a drink fortified with vitamins for healthy lovers She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
for healthy lovers you need lots of good fiber So roll in the hay |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
so roll in the hay tear the cover off the ball care not for false wishes She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Care not for false wishes Bestowed by heavy breathers They may smoke you out Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
they may smoke you out those partakers of the weed legalization |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
legalization for professional ladies who are nonsmokers She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
who are nonsmokers I guess people who don't smoke what else do they do It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What else do they do other than flapping their wings crisp currents of dawn |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
crisp currents of dawn camera pan to window Curtains blowing in "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
curtains blowing in somethings going on outside somethings going on She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Somethings going on: humans are awakening a shift of level |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
a shift of level had me leaning into her this is how we met She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
this is how we met throwing pistols in the lake to make us holy Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
to make us holy we got into the river and we were baptized |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
and we were baptized in a flurry of bullets ankle deep in rice Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
ankle deep in rice: blood stained Earth moans in pain when will humans learn |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
When will humans learn A rhetorical question Which has no answer Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Which has no answer crystal sphere or tarot card future remains blank |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
future remains blank we like to live in the now sweet Billy and me It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
sweet Billy and me but we spelled her name Billie gave each other all ~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
gave each other all smoochin' in the old love seat resting on the porch fun! fun! fun! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
resting on the porch my feet perched on the dog's back he growls . . . inhales, sighs |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Resting on the porch daydreaming in vague sunshine, Deep in December |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Deep in December Brides wait patiently for June Daddy oils shotgun Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Daddy oils shotgun: visions of blood bring sadness gloomy dirge echoes |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
gloomy dirge echoes lightning during a snowstorm Thunder in winter "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
thunder in winter weather or mixed emotions rain falls on their hearts She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
rain falls on their hearts: fragrance of new Spring expands rainbow reflections |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
rainbow reflections a kaleidoscope of hope the sun brings to us |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
The sun brings to us All things to sustain our lives All things but true love Some things we have to do on our own. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
All things but true love live only for them selves True love lives for two |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
True love lives for two Polygamy just won't do Two hearts to be true Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
two hearts to be true need to trust in each other love will find a way One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
love will find a way if you really look for it don't put blinders on It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Don't put blinders on: there is so much to be seen love gifts from above |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
love gifts from above in all the shapes and sizes to fit everyone |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
to fit everyone was the goal of the tailor wearing a slicker She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
wearing a slicker in nasty, nasty weather looking for sunshine ~ Do what you have to do to feel right, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Looking for sunshine: under a dark cloud cover imagination |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
imagination two walking through life as one with small additions She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
with small additions often come big subtractions from Billy's wallet It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
from Billy's wallet the pickpocket got suprised only one dollar "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Only one dollar: to bury for future needs just light a candle |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Just light a candle Slip in beneath the covers 'til the candle fades Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
‘til the candle fades It will illuminate us Nowhere to hide then |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
nowhere to hide then nowhere to hide now either surrender to her She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Surrender to her, she'll give over the moon love, you won't regret it |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
you won't regret it matters settle in their way life goes on and on yeah, sure...but can I get there from here if I don't know where I am or even how I got here! Must have made a left at Hello Poetry instead of a right at Poetry.com. All this blue is familiar though...maybe I'll ask a cop. Touch, but don't look |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Life goes on and on One change after another Holes in my pockets Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Holes in my pockets as well as my poor jammies, Santa..please be good |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Santa please be good to all in my neighborhood save my house for last She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Save my house for last do stay a little longer chatting by the fire |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
chatting by the fire reminiscing Christmas past hopes for the new year |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
hopes for the new year two thousand sixteen we get and maybe its good ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
And maybe its good Your telling me to leave you Your wish shall come true Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your wish shall come true: thoughts realize easily keep beauty in mind |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Keep beauty in mind when you think of me and mine I am vanity |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am vanity: ladies are splendid artworks peacocks deep at heart  |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
peacocks deep at heart prancing around in disguise laboring like mules She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Laboring like mules In the sweat shops of the world We dress with such style Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
we dress with such style we strut our stuff everywhere then turn into dust |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Then turn into dust For from the dust were you formed By the Hand of God Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
By the Hand of God creation continues now awareness must grow |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
awareness must grow mind and body in concert peaceful harmony She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
[This message has been edited by ice (12-27-2015 05:56 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
peaceful harmony: act out of true love always create a new world |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
create a new world acts of kindness at a time Let love be your guide |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
let love be your guide embrace it with all your might see it come to life She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
see it come to life watering my chia plant thinking of my love It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thinking of my love: warmth diffuses in my heart passion stirs within |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
passion stirs within a flood of deep emotions climactic release She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
climactic release as you reach the sky for stars utter ecstasy ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
utter ecstasy Refractory period cuddle while waiting |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
cuddle while waiting playing 'trust me' in the park well worth waiting for She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well worth waiting for the very best things in life especially love [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (12-29-2015 11:10 AM).] |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
especially love an espresso kind of love strong and to the point It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
strong and to the point I really put my foot down until she came home She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
until she came home he was a lost little pup could not find a thing |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
could not find a thing crept back out through the window its a dirty shame She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
It's a dirty shame more don't reply to others, just drive-by Poet's |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
just drive-by Poet's tommy-guns spitting out words wounds but never kills It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wounds but never kills this crazy thing we call love Brave hearts will love on |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Brave hearts will love on Unrequited, or not Hearts want what they want "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Brave hearts will love on Unrequited, or not Hearts want what they want |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
hearts want what they want wicked and deceptive thoughts acting out the fool She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
acting out the fool we are all guilty of that ignorance is bliss |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ignorance is bliss when the old fades into new reveals brand new year |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
reveals brand new year what will this new year be like learn from our mistakes ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
learn from our mistakes is something that guides our path flows with strength of life |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
flows with strength of life this rogue river I call love I am immersed in It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I am immersed in Natural pools of desire Where I sometimes drown "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
where I sometimes drown the deep space between your words still treading water She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
still treading water paying all our bills on time hard to get ahead It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Hard to get ahead: evolution is needed Mother Earth cries out |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Mother Earth cries out In her pain and suffering Not a soul listens Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Not a soul listens that doesn't feel the pain too Hope that all should hear |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
hope that all should hear despair disguised as ear wax travels with the fool She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Travels with the fool, large gabby mouth inside a trunk of sarcasam |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
trunk of sarcasm built like Charley McCarthy no voice of his own She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
no voice of his own the mute plays a saxophone hear that baby wail |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
hear that baby wail pants full of creamy good stuff Desitin rescue She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Desitin rescue Will not help the rash you have Next time sleep at home |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Next time sleep at home that's just what my friends mom said when we were noisy It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
When we were noisy Neighbors would rap on the wall Slowing our tempo Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
slowing our tempo but lengthening our flames making smoke signals |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
making smoke signals sitting around a hookah ectoplasmic dreams She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ectoplasmic dreams: mysterious face appears I want you to smile |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
I want you to smile so I tickle your fingers until your lips part She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Until your lips part I am lost in dreams of bliss kiss me already |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
kiss me allready before sunrise melts with dawn rooster crows outside |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
rooster crows outside waking us from a deep sleep morning chores await It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
morning chores await feed 'em, milk 'em, kick 'em out my pasture babies She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
my pasture babies floating in a Dali field light as a feather Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
light as a feather because you have kissed me my heart has found wings |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
light as a feather Snowflakes that fell through dry air On a coal black cat "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
OMG-sorry Lori..we posted at the same moment I like yours better....:-) |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
On a coal black cat I made a desperate wish, green eyed dream escape |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
green eyed dream escape a place where only cats live where everyone purrs It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
where everyone purrs a sound which reverberates within lovers' hearts ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Within lovers' hearts Shadow lying unobserved Darkness awaits you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Darkness awaits you if you allow love to fade hearts are fed by light |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
hearts are fed by light nurtured with great care and love sweet matrimony She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Sweet Matrimony Tasting of bridal flowers Fresh from the florist Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Fresh from the florist Not as pretty as picked weeds In a small childs hand |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
In a small child's hands A whole world is discovered Share love and kindness |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Share love and kindness Wear your best smile, stay awhile It makes you feel good ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-10-2016 05:12 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And make you feel good: whenever you help someone be true to yourself |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
be true to yourself no matter what people say be uniquely you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Be uniquely you: you shine like a precious pearl pure joy for the eyes |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
pure joy for the eyes my Playboy centerfold girl I think I'm in love She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
I think I'm in love he said all these things to me my heart flew away It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
My heart flew away First loves never really die Simply fade to blue Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
simply fade to blue when I'm wanting to find you and your warm words too |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
And your warm words too Will not open edens gate Your touch is the key |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your touch is the key: Open to the Universe discover beauty |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
discover beauty which catch your eyes and remain faithful to love's charm ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Faithful to love's charm I indulge in dreams of bliss on vast sky meadows |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
On vast sky meadows I can feel your smile from here, ever close..but far |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
ever close but far liking you from a distance as if you were here It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
As if you were here Instead of a reflection In a pool of tears (Yours was truly inspiring mon cher Stacy Lynn) Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In a pool of tears dawn rises in pink colors sip at love's chalice |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
sip at love's chalice bring your wet lips together through the darkest times She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry for this ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry for this also . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
through the darkest times when loves passion falls apart search yourself for wrongs ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
search yourself for wrongs before you get to the plane save your dignity She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
save your dignity as in the average workplace none is to be found "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
none is to be found when one continues to look in the wrong places It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
in the wrong places puzzle pieces just won't fit forcing them won't help |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Forcing them won't help I know from experience Take my word for it Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Take my word for it Gratitude is a feel good Try it you like it |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Try it you like it Sitting on top of the world Gives sense of balance ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Gives sense of balance Centering exercises Prior to the hit Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Prior to the hit you thought you were all alone shots fired at midnight |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
shots fired at midnight Billy's dad is shining deer he better watch out It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
he better watch out husband coming home early six shots fired all hit ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
he better watch out husband coming home early six shots fired all hit ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Six shots fired all hit Not a Maggie's drawers' in sight Paid target puller Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
paid target puller got hit by a stray bullet it's a hole in one |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
it's a hole in one think about it scratch your head life can be so good ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
life can be so good if you ignore the perverts life can be so good |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
life can be so good changing the can be to is life is very good She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Life is very good For you and I it's a game Not so for others Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
not so for others who have not walked in our shoes feel like tap dancing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Feel like tap dancing romantic generation music unites all |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
music unites all let's tiptoe round the tulip and all dozy-do ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
And all dozy-do Square-dancing with Miss Lori Straw bales in the mow Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Straw bales in the mow sun fragrance upon our skin kisses seal our lips |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kisses seal our lips sending shivers head to toe sneaking to hayloft |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
sneaking to hayloft The dusty hay makes us sneeze Interrupts kissing "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interrupts kissing to stargaze fingers entwined awe inspiring sight |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
awe inspiring sight when light first entered her eyes earning her first smile She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Earning her first smile when words painted dreams in red the horizon blushed |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
the horizon blushed felt a tingle in my heart went red in my face ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
went red in my face after he kissed me in school but its better now It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
but its better now now that my heart has come home Good old welcome mat She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
good old welcome mat in front of my old front door welcoming old friends |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
welcoming old friends heart knows the hearts of others Through hard times and good She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
through hard times and good Billy and I are still us and that's good enough It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
and that's good enough perfect is not possible but excellent is |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
but excellent is just a way of describing how I think of you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How I think of you: You dance upon my heart floor your mind beguiles me |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
your mind beguiles me like a serpent in a tree speaking in riddles She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Speaking in riddles: women enjoy mysteries men try to explore |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
men try to explore by opening many doors none am I behind It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
none am I behind I'm at the front of the line giving out free hugs |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
giving out free hugs and warm embraces they are gives my heart a tug ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
gives my heart a tug when my feelings are a drag this my Billy knows It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
this my Billy knows that a tin can is tasty if you're an old goat She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
If you're an old goat your heart still dances gladly others may not know |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
others may not know others may not even care who we really are She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Who we really are: the question of a lifetime we are all starseeds |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
we are all starweeds, inhabiting the heavens for the best and worse. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
for the best and worse are the efforts of each one of your many thoughts If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
of your many thoughts only one remains so true that one is for you She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
That one is for you You can enjoy this one too Until you turn Blue ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Until you turn Blue Only then will I back off Releasing my grip (I'm not really the violent type, it all just seemed to fit) One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
releasing my grip the dove flew towards the sky a symbol of peace |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A symbol of peace humanity needs freedom dignity of life |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
dignity of life a chance to be respected just for being me She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
just for being me minus all my transgressions I am a nice guy "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
I am a nice guy at least that's what my dog says he sure ought to know She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
He sure ought to know: love lives beyond time and space telepathy works |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
telepathy works thinking about an old flame got me slapped silly She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
got me slapped silly took awhile my head to clear from her purse came knife ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
from her purse came knife she felt threatened by his moves can't say I blame her If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
can't say I blame her she just had no choice you know she was right |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
can't say I blame her she had no choice you know it was right |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You know it was right but you just had to turn left to see what was there |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
to see what was there in the neon light glare but not what you thought |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
"but not what you thought" is not the best way to end the flow of short poems She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The flow of short poems: each line should stand on its own feelings are precious |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
feelings are precious why'd it take so long to know my brain was empty ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My brain was empty: Life brings many impressions to choose love is wise |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
to choose love is wise love only comes at high cost you must choose wisely "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." Carl Sandburg |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
you must choose wisely or forever dream of what might have been |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
of what might have been may not have been after all you will never know She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
you will never know not for a million years unless I tell you If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Unless I tell you you might not see the beauty never shut your eyes |
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
never shut your eyes except, maybe when you're kissed and groped by Eros "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
and groped by Eros with a million thunder bolts time to get real ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
time to get real when you're holding kings and queens in an Uno game |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In an Uno game matching cards stay for good luck smart foxes play well |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
smart foxes play well I rate smart above foxy Foxiness wears off |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Foxiness wears off: Self exaltation is wrong self defense is right "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
self defense is right you smack me and I smack you then we will be friends If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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quatro04 Junior Member Posts 12 |
then we will be friends and collaborate our skills to communicate |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To communicate it takes a brief touch of eyes soft heartspeak follows |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
soft heartspeak follows the flow of the Universe be still and listen |
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quatro04 Junior Member Posts 12 |
Be still and listen The heart can tell no lies Listen, I'm speaking to you. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
listen, I'm speaking to you in the nicest tone I can don't hang up the phone If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Don't hang up the phone sing a lullaby to me dream with me this night "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
dream with me this night let us compare what was said we are true lovers ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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quatro04 Junior Member Posts 12 |
We are true lovers that co-exist in the dark forgetting the day |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
forgetting the day remember the night until the dawn has come |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Until the dawn has come our souls roam the Universe in sleep we travel |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
In sleep we travel to the birthplace of our souls rejuvination |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
rejuvenation Lotus roots in winter mud waiting renaissance "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
waiting renaissance an impatient change of heart still I sit and wait Hey youse! She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
still I sit and wait like watching wet paint drying staring at the phone If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Staring at the phone, technological snake bite, taints Eden's promise Is this heaven? |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
taints Eden's promise Is human hunger penance For one apple bite? (senryu) "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
for one apple bite resisting not temptation condemnation fell |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
condemnation fell so I picked up the cursed thing made you an altar If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
made you an altar white gold with a diamond cracker jack special One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
cracker jack special reach your hand inside the box for the mystery ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
For the mystery will always be with us that's why it takes faith |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
that's why it takes faith within yourself to "do" right then magic will come ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
then magic will come just like a thief in the night keep a steady watch If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Keep a steady watch For the thief comes after dark Looking quite like me ...just bein' Bluesy |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
looking quite like me a sad mosaic of fragments nightmare marionette |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Nightmare marionette how you sashay with sandman, tango of madness |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
tango of madness dancing with abandonment hypnotic movement If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
tango of madness dance of dark desiring feet don't fail me now |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
feet don't fail me now Manton Moreland-The Jade Mask Reaction to clues |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Reaction to clues suspicious, were they planted.. am I paranoid.. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
am I paranoid hearing things that others don't not what's being said If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
not what's being said it's what is not being heard my voice in your ear I'm probably not supposed to answer myself but no one is playing much! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Kisses on canvas brushed with water colored tears framed with ecstasy ·´~`·Â»Garapan«Â·´~`· |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Hmm.. wrong Haiku... ·´~`·Â»Garapan«Â·´~`· |
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booky1940! Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136Canada |
Writing quite swift In dark of night A story to tell! |
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booky1940! Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136Canada |
Writing quite swift In dark of night A story to tell! |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
rainyday Member since 11-12-2015 Posts 274 Heartland USA Haiku-Chain.. Everyone welcome to play along. Using the Last line of previous Haiku as the First line of your new Haiku. So guys that's the way rainyday wants it to work so I'll start again working from your last line! Don't forget to make the poem 5-7-5 too! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
a story to tell of the greatest man who lived a long time ago If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
a long time ago I looked in to a mirror staring at us all C'mon youse guys and play! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
staring at us all the Almighty from above and He is smiling |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
and He is smiling to those he calls His children wayward is the Word ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-03-2016 06:33 PM).] |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
wayward is the Word tricking minds with no guidance purity in prayer If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Purity in prayer Like a word from our sponsor Mass for the many More feelings and fewer words please |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Mass for the many The sacrement is flowers Dogwoods in full bloom |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
dogwoods in full bloom taking a walk in the park jealous cat meows so cool to see more play here! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Jealous cat meows Perched upon a picket fence Alley full of love More feelings and fewer words please |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
alley full of love ten pins fall in paradise foot at the foul line That's the ticket! Play some more guys! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
foot at the foul line wondering if I should cross red lips reflecting moon light |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
foot at the foul line wondering if I should cross question of ethics (adjusted due to the 5-7-7 in previous post) More feelings and fewer words please |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ari........... Was the end two lines of a Tanka--my bad |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
question of ethics knowing what is write and wrong before many eyes If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
before many eyes view uncountable blossoms one petal unfurls |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
One petal unfurls Spring is born into our hearts sweet fragrance of love "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Sweet fragrance of love Flowers of seven virgins In my field of dreams More feelings and fewer words please |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In my field of dreams butterflies sip at flowers life regenerates "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
life regenerates God is the arquitect Faith is our inner strength |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Kisses on canvas Oh, I returned them with zest It wasn't steamy ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Kisses on canvas I puckered up gave them back But they wasn't steamy ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
but they wasn't steamy just moist enough to savor such an aftertaste This post is moving again! YaY! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
such an aftertaste gives me feelings of amour oh! that is for sure ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Oh! that is for sure Letter of great Irish names With apostrophe More feelings and fewer words please |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
With apostrophe leave out mystery letters discovery space |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
discovery space was the distance between us before we first met |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Before we first met I thought I had known beauty My poor perceptions More feelings and fewer words please |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You will never know Love's immeasurable bliss unless you risk loss. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
rainyday Member since 11-12-2015 Posts 274 Heartland USA Haiku-Chain.. quote: Don't be in such a rush to get your own thoughts out there LGR. rainyday set the rules of the game, not I. You make it difficult to follow along if you go it alone. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Unless you risk loss May as well stay in your shell Chewing on your nails More feelings and fewer words please |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
chewing on your nails a fright made for halloween at your fingers end If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
at your fingers end sensitivity of touch incites arousal "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
incites arousal aromas of the outdoors hidden in his skin If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
hidden in his skin trails of his misspent childhood long sleeves in summer More feelings and fewer words please |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
long sleeves in summer when you live in the mountains evening air is cool |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
evening air is cool huddling best at getting warm then comes whatever ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
then comes whatever as dreams unfold into the land of never |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Into the land of never Progression waits for no man Funeral of dreams More feelings and fewer words please |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
funeral of dreams as I plant summer flowers I think of winter "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
I think of Winter When I think of her cold heart Warming my lost soul More feelings and fewer words please |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
warming my lost soul finding refuge in your love makes me whole again If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
makes me whole again when you look at me and smile clouds are blown away ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kisses on canvas Embraces about the world Enhancing love for mankind. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Hey you Nan! You're not paying attention! quote: ********************************************* JerryPat2 Member Laureate since 02-06-2011 Posts 14456 South Louisiana makes me whole again when you look at me and smile clouds are blown away ******************************************** clouds are blown away each time dad opens his mouth long winded lectures If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Long-winded lectures Hoping she'd whisper to me Moist upon my ear More feelings and fewer words please |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
moist upon my ear like the cold nose of my cat snuggling in the night Wow! I had to go looking for this! I almost forgot about it! C'mon you guys! Let's keep it going! Whatever happen to rainyj? If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
snuggling in the night yellow cat sleeps by my head fur on my pillow |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Fur on my pillow Pajamas out on the line She's so humorous More feelings and fewer words please |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
she's so humorous he laughed 'til he cried smiled 'til face hurt |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
smiled 'til face hurt where before he had been sad he was a changed man ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
He was a changed man But then he's always changing She said its his way More feelings and fewer words please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
She said its his way For sure a chameleon And changing his spots ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
and changing his spots blemishes of poetry singing cat house songs If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Singing cat house songs purring ladies of the night sleek in the moonlight |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Sleek in the moonlight As two shadow puppets dance Wishing to be real More feelings and fewer words please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wishing to be real Abracadabra do tell Tell the truth forsooth ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Tell the truth forsooth Trying to undo mistake. Let it all hang out ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-07-2016 09:36 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
let it all hang out going to the beach for fun come home with a burn |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Come home with a burn She with the red on her back Must have been on top More feelings and fewer words please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Must have been on top She was doing it her way A difference in taste ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A difference in taste Pearl diving for oysters' best Tuna on my tongue More feelings and fewer words please |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Smoke covers the hills It seems that someone has died Snipers never cry |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay, Mr. Martini . . . Haiku-Chain.. Everyone welcome to play along. Using the Last line of previous Haiku as the First line of your new Haiku ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A difference in taste Pearl diving for oysters' best Tuna on my tongue Let's try it again, shall we? More feelings and fewer words please [This message has been edited by Ari Squire (07-11-2016 01:08 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Tuna on my tongue My special is mine alone No, I do not share ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
No, I do not share For there are none to compare Check her out and see Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Check her out and see Her hope embraces sunshine Just for her children |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Just for her children She clapped, did a do-si-do When done face was flushed ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
When done face was flushed Doing porcelain headstand Where others may sit Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
where others may sit special cushions make a sound just like a Bronx cheer If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Just like a Bronx cheer Fire the shot heard 'round the world Odoriferous Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Odoriferous The political climate The same as always ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
The same as always Mantra searching for pure joy Never ending quest Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Never ending quest Discovering new sevens Fitting flawlessly I don't have to play with myself you know, but no one was looking, so I took a chance. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
fitting flawlessly words fall into place in rhyme a poem is born |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a poem is born and unto it we are one funny how that works ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Funny how that works A small signal from within Flowing from without Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
flowing from without in a never ending stream truth personified ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Truth personified Some say that is Jesus truth is infinite |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Truth is infinite Human use of it is not Would I lie to you? Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
would I lie to you? not without a good reason people are complex |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
People are complex Conducting thoughts in abstract When baking a cake Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When baking a cake Your nose tells you when it's done Yummy, smell that cake ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
yummy, smell that cake! its a special occasion I want a big piece |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
I want a big piece Of your loving ass baby Too late, it has gone. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Too late, it has gone Spark danced only at midnight For one night only Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
for one night only she showed her tender soul overexposed |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
overexposed too much is shown to the light zero to nothing ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Overexposed id Motivation of desire Lost within her thoughts Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
lost within her thoughts they held her captive in chains a kiss broke her free |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a kiss broke her free back in the saddle again hero walking tall ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
hero walking tall little lady on his arm happy trails to you |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Happy trails to you Searching for a few good laughs Precious herbs to trade Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
precious herbs to trade roll them up or in a pipe watch what you wish for I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
watch what you wish for the tables will somehow turn and scorch you badly ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
and scorch you badly? forest fires have had their way scars are nothing now |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Scars are nothing now Like Saturday night tattoos Gleaming blades of chrome Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gleaming blades of chrome A switchblade made from fine art Think of the fifties ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
think of the fifties think again of the hundreds gone from my fingers |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Gone from my fingers Callouses that once made love Upon my twelve string Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
upon my twelve string hangs my freshly washed laundry musically dried I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Musically dried lullaby notes hover stars, diary of dreams |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Diary of Dreams Page forty-three line thirty Miracles happen Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
miracles happen like a swirl of chocolate whipped to perfection I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Whipped to perfection A dazzling confection To tease your taste buds One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
To tease your taste buds I would die a thousand lives For just one more taste |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
for just one more taste a thousand deaths would I die Yearning for your kiss I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
yearning for your kiss hugging you tight in the dark stardust in our eyes |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
stardust in our eyes but soon our eyes were stinging a dust cloud blew up ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
a dust cloud blew up winds blasted the night's stillness the air has grown claws |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
the air has grown claws in the Louisiana floods a pitiful site ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A pitiful site Caskets floating like sailboats On seas of debris Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
on seas of debris float away broken lives grief and hopelessness |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Grief and hopelessness A salve for all aching souls Found in love and light Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Found in love and light A mystery of two souls Dead, but still alive |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dead, but still alive The heart is that way sometimes It's amour again ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
It's amour again Sealed and cured in a rune stone Star of the circle Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Star of the circle Passions in the pentagram Such an odd request ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
such an odd request chain of syllable poems add your Haiku here |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
add your Haiku here keep this poetry to date I prefer senryu ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
I prefer senryu Expressing stranger feelings Pleasantries of sex Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Pleasantries of sex Fearless with abandonment Served at a good price ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Served at a good price California burgundy Two glasses at night ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Two glasses at night One empty the other full She never showed up Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
She never showed up Though she never turned me down Her ace in the hole ...True as compass rose |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Her ace in the hole 'Course she deals below the deck They hung her for that ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-24-2016 11:08 AM).] |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
they hung her for that the keening of night heightens death, where is your sting. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Death, where is your sting Where too, is your victory Among the shrouded ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Among the shrouded There was death inside the crypt Look! He has risen ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Look! He has risen His bottle yet in his hand A Sino-Wino Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
A Sino-Wino Have no idea what that is Clue me in or not ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Sino- is Chinese Sino-this or Sino-that Accept it or not  "Chinese" didn't rhyme with "wino", so...Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Accept it or not Why wouldn't I accept it You surely would know ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
You surely would know A Chinese rice wine taster By their strict taste buds Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
By their strict taste buds Snakes in the grass seek their prey Eagles eat vipers |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eagles eat vipers This is the law of the land Eat or be eaten ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Eat or be eaten Always turn the other cheek With a wary eye |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
With a wary eye Are the guilty to be found Whether or not true Touch, but don't look |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
whether or not true tis about who believes who are you credible? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
are you credible? with watchful eyes upon you can you pass the test? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Can you pass the test? Will others say you're the best? I failed with the rest I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
I failed with the rest Spent my days sitting on curbs 'Til I learned to talk Touch, but don't look |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
'Til I learned to talk Struggles surrounded the isles Of man and woman I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
of man and woman will the wonders ever cease amazing delights ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Amazing delights Are just what the selfish seek Live in your own love |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
live in your own love where the living is easy living at the ritz ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Living at the Ritz Seeing all where fashion sits Dollars for your thoughts Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
dollars for your thoughts a small consideration for what you're thinking I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
for what you're thinking you might be executed or she'd jump your bones ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
or she'd jump your bones in a frenzy of passion send you home aching I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
send you home aching oh, but what a lovely ache sensuous pleasure ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
sensuous pleasure taking a census of sex who does the counting? I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
who does the counting? passion is in the forefront just hang on sloopy ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
just hang on sloopy the fingers may be weary the sixties were great |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
The sixties were great Yanking Hurst's in muscle cars Smoke poured from wheel wells Touch, but don't look |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
smoke poured from wheel wells the bend is so tight, my friend you didn't make it |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
You didn't make it You never were good with girls A limp for the tricks Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a limp for the tricks up and down the boulevard taking what you can ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Taking what you can Leaving their bones for the dogs Poached eyes for breakfast ...True as compass rose |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Poached eyes for breakfast Metaphor for hangovers Cooked sunny-side up Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
cooked sunny-side up isn't tasteless going down wretched gag reflect ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Wretched gag reflect Cora speaking of oral Loosed glue on dentures I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Loosed glue on dentures Caused considerable strain In the way she worked ...True as compass rose |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
In the way she worked She could not go unnoticed Playful with a smile Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
playful with a smile like a moonbeam on her face hides her wickedness ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Hides her wickedness Within the dreams of rune stones In a mojo sack ...just bein' Bluesy |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
In a mojo sack, charms to be charmed, mezmerized, like a cool hand luke |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Like a cool hand Luke Bites like an alligator Smiles like a baby Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
smiles like a baby perchance she's giving her all she holds out her arms ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She holds out her arms To greet her long-time friend, as He placed kiss on cheek |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
He placed kiss on cheek As she lay in her casket Looking like Snow White ...True as compass rose |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Looking like Snow White I appeared to be wholesome 'Til my wedding night I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
'til my wedding night but he could tell the real truth wasn't quite so pure ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Wasn't quite so pure Lovers lock had been opened Picked by a skilled hand Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
picked by a skilled hand those fingernails were so good soothed the savage beast ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
soothed the savage beast a critter laying in wait when I came home late I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
when I came home late porch light had not been turned out I gritted my teeth ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
I gritted my teeth biting down on the bullet for all that he said I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
for all that he said she said twice over again yin ragging at yang One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
yin ragging at rang oh, so many mouths to feed chickens can't have souls |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
No! No! No! Grandmama! Not "yin ragging at rang", it's: yin ragging at yang oh, so many mouths to feed chickens can't have souls One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Chickens can't have souls It's not that they can't have one Chickens don't have souls One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
chickens don't have souls a monumental issue goes good in gumbo ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Goes good in gumbo? soulless chicken in soul food wicked but tasty. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
wicked but tasty such delight was in her eyes she teased the men so ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
She teased the men so With just a rise of her skirt False promise of love Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
false promise of love he gives his heart completely she broke it into ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
She broke it into A devastating number Of tiny, sad hearts. I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Of tiny, sad hearts Were happy hearts created Within the circle Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
within the circle some say 'twill will not be broken souls are lost sometimes ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
souls are lost sometimes an abyss of broken hearts revealed in one mind Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
revealed in one mind majority thought him mad a true cuckoo bird ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A true cuckoo bird Singing ridiculous songs Never once on time Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
kisses on kanvas are simply kanvas kisses kiss for reality |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
never once on time late, and just a sucker's dream dream on, you sucker |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Life is a carnival live it for all you're worth |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
thank you controller x |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
'These are the days'..... Van Morrison. x |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Dream on, you sucker It's a bent barrel you use Kewpie doll escapes Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
kewpie doll escapes running fast down the midway right into my arms I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
right into my arms planted a wicked tongue kiss it bucked my knees ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-18-2016 11:04 AM).] |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
it bucked my knees she had a mighty right cross steam iron in hand One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Steam iron in hand The envelope was opened Love letter exposed Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
love letter exposed with words of hearts and flowers bringing tears to her ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Bringing tears to her Such an emotional girl Needing so much love Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
needing so much love wander in and out of it can't seem to catch on ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
can't seem to catch on let go until you are off free falling in love I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Free falling in love Hand reaching for the 'D' ring Then changes her mind ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
then changes her mind for want of a better word she has gone kaput ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
She has gone kaput Adolf's lovely Eva Braun A lady in love Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a lady in love happiness is in her eyes the future rosy ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
the future rosy an O'Grady from the farm an old fashioned girl I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
An old fashioned girl A beauty with a bustle Victorian queen ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Victorian Queen A sister to Queen Mary Floating Royal bonds Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
floating royal bonds as though they were your life blood they will crash and burn ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
they will crash and burn all those who speak against us talk and walk like fools I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
talk and walk like fools and with their chest expanded caves in when found out ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Caves in when found out Like a cheater's alibi Same old sorry tune Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
same old sorry tune "I've got a tear in my beer" wants to come back home I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Wants to come back home Now that his dreams have failed him Painting mommy's toes ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
painting mommy's toes giving teacher an apple getting so much love One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
getting so much love remembering the sad times they are all gone now ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
They are all gone now Those that jumped rope in the streets Chalk on the sidewalks ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
chalk on the sidewalks sky blue in a hopscotch game double-dutch with ropes I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
double-dutch with ropes be watchful how the wind blows don't spit into it ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
don't spit into it if its not a cuspidor it may be an eye One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
it may be an eye you know, an eye for an eye so the story goes ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
so the story goes and I see no end this night haiku's never die |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
haiku's never die not so with haiku writers legacy of thoughts I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
legacy of thoughts leaves us with diversity this is food for thought ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
This is food for thought Palatable poetics In five seven five Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
in five seven five its a true count for haiku everything else sucks ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Everything else sucks My vacuum cleaner, my straw Why doesn't my wife? Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
why doesn't my wife believe me when I say no smiling all the way ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-29-2016 10:38 PM).] |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Smiling all the way A happy day is payday Buying her a gift Touch, but don't look |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
buying her a gift a bribe to win his sweetheart when he done her wrong I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
when he done her wrong she forgave him every time last time shot him dead ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
last time shot him dead and left him there forever cold hearted woman |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Cold hearted woman Meeting a cold hearted man Rock and a hard place Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
rock and a hard place cleavage to make your heart stop with sultry perfume ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
With sultry perfume She danced as Mata Hari Scent of a woman Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
scent of a woman kept his nose up in the air fell in my headlights I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
fell in my headlights for the night was starkly dark the deer creamed my Ford ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
The deer creamed my Ford Must have been love at first sight Only cost a buck Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
only cost a buck she thought they meant her buck teeth her rage was severe ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Her rage was severe When I handed in my test Having sketched her breasts Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
having sketched her breasts he asked if he could sketch more if she'd stay 'til four I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
if she'd stay 'til four I'd get up and close the door penetrate her eyes ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
penetrate her eyes see into her loving soul her truth is in you I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Her truth is in you, beneath the tent of your soul, embrace her essence |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
embrace her essence breathe in the scent of her love name her rainy jay One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
name her rainy Jay her name to brush your lips until the dawn we'll play |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Until dawn we'll play (edited out "the") Loving our to and 'fro ways Enjoying each day Touch, but don't look |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Enjoying each day With my baby at my side She is a good poem Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
she is a good poem and I can sense her psyche it mellows me out ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
it mellows me out seems I have said something wrong it's okay, goodbye ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
it's okay, goodbye amiable terms are best we must live our lives I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
we must live our lives didn't say goodbye for real still hanging around ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Still hanging around After all these years of words Trying to say them ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
trying to say them and when my mouth opens wide the words tumble out ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
The words tumble out As their effect tumbles in Dues must now be paid ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
dues must now be paid if not there are collectors and you don't want that ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
and you don't want that if it's going to make you sick sweet fruit of the moon I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Sweet fruit of the moon, crescent slice of orange glow, lips smack of moon-soul |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
lips smack of moon-soul tentative tongue comes alive all is well tonight ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-08-2016 05:25 PM).] |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
All is well tonight, raindrops explore cheek, not tears, the wind my escort |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
The wind my escort As if the breath of angels My ship's sails are full Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
my ship's sails are full but no tugging of the wind I set sail ner'more ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I set sail ner'more My First Mate became pregnant My cook told me no ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
my cook told me no my son sang a different tune think I'll have some wine ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Think I'll have some wine Give that gal of mine a call See if we still can Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
see if we still can and mount the stairs one more time no way we cannot ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
no way we cannot figure out how to do it kiss a fool good bye I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Kiss a fool good bye Leave him with some pocket change To pay you next time ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
to pay you next time he whispered into her ear she said thanks no thanks ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
she said thanks no thanks to my hand carved wooden coin no good for a kiss I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
no good for a kiss an exception can be made on tomorrows day ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
On tomorrows day Darkness is promised to her Kisses to die for ...True As Compass Rose |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Kisses to die for Death could never be sweeter From your lips so red |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
from your lips so red hides from us cold bloody heart it will frost your things ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
it will frost your things and your baubles will turn blue seeking hands that warm |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
seeking hands that warm she knew just where to put them she's such a sweetheart ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
she's such a sweetheart learned it all behind the barn loved all my lessons I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
loved all my lessons loved the teacher best of all oh the memories ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
oh the memories barefooting it in high grass loose summer sack dress I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
loose summer sack dress like a feed store burlap sack you must be some fun One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
You must be some fun As a Hurdy-Gurdy man Monkey works the crank Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
monkey works the crank methamphetamine is done crank to street people ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
crank to street people your vernacular is true takes one to know one One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
takes one to know one a shame this got personal but yeah I was one ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
but yeah I was one when married I became two soon we became three I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
soon we became three that was when the baby came bounced her on my knee ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Bounced her on my knee Sang her a song of six-pence Love to hear her laugh Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
love to hear her laugh sounds almost like a poem laugh and you'll see ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Kisses on canvas Word pictures by whispered breath Soul softly spoken |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
ThisDiamond, you are supposed to take the last line of the last post and use it for the first line of your haiku. I just do not understand why people cannot heed directions. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
laugh and you'll see so much joy for you and me soon we will find peace I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
soon we will find peace buried inside the moons face finally he smiles ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Finally he smiles Reaching for her back in time Seeing her again Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
seeing her again he stares with a startled look ducks in the alley ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-18-2016 07:19 PM).] |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
ducks in the alley marching while quacking in time Daffy's the black one I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Daffy's the black one Who speaks with a distinct lisp Colorful diction Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
colorful diction giving distinct sound of class can be mistaken ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Can be mistaken But only when it's not right Curse or blessing due Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
curse or blessing due has it all come down to this oh please be tender ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Oh please be tender Warm your thoughts before you speak See me as I am Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
see me as I am treading water not to drown please throw me a rope ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
please throw me a rope make sure its not a snake I'm afraid of snakes |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
I'm afraid of snakes Though only venomous ones Constrictors I like Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
constrictors I like oh my Ari how you talk feels good at midnight ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
feels good at midnight or at any other time if you are willing I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Green-eyed dream escape of having more than enough to not go without |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lori, I thought you knew that you were supposed to take the last line in the haiku above you and use it as the first line of your new haiku. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
If you are willing Let your feelings be your guide Your heart will follow Touch, but don't look |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Your heart will follow Once you know your own thinking So give it some thought ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
so give it some thought weigh all the pros and the cons then make the right choice ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
then make the right choice even if others say nay right is always right I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
right is always right except when it’s wrong as sin so spell checker says ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
so spell checker says an authority on words it's the final word I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
it's the final word booming down as though above you must listen now ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
you must listen now to the echo of your thoughts silent in the night |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Silent in the night Her flatulence like perfume Wafts across the room ...True As Compass Rose |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
wafts across the room dank odor covered us all eh I'm outta here ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Eh I'm outta here When once I was over there Wanting to get here Touch, but don't look |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
wanting to get here was not really my first choice bases were loaded I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
bases were loaded even in the first inning Cleveland six to naught ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Cleveland six to naught Sometimes Indians can win Unlike the movies Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Unlike the movies A play is so intimate I exit stage left |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I exit stage left taking my cue right on time she's waiting for me ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
she's waiting for me I was hoping that she would there's none quite like her I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
there's none quite like her what she does is amazing through it all a smile ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Through it all a smile Never giving up or in Winning when losing Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
winning when losing is an artful thing to do so put on your smile ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
So put on your smile A woman likes to see teeth Before she says yes ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
before she says yes she'll want to know what you want tell her fearlessly I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
tell her fearlessly where it is you want to go watch her eyes light up ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
watch her eyes light up like a fox in the main beam which way will she jump |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
which way will she jump when he tells her to do so skillet on the head I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
skillet on the head we're getting nasty in here eh "comme ci comme ça" ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Eh "comme ci comme ça" It's all according to size She would dispute that Touch, but don't look |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
She would dispute that Or anything else I said So I say nothing Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
so I say nothing I mean what is left to say happens all the time ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
happens all the time relying on alarm clocks always late for work I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
always late for work just had to stay home longer lovin' is that good ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
lovin' is that good fulfilling each promise made on our special day I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
On our special day We spoke words to seal our love Fifty years ago Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
fifty years ago my body was tip top shape time took care of that ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Time took care of that Like Tennessee Ernie Ford Loaded sixteen tons "one fist of iron the other of steel, if the right one don't gitcha' then the left one will"! I don't have fists like that anymore either JerryPat, just two prunes hangin' off my wrists! Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I made a mistake here . . . Sorry . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
loaded sixteen tons of very insightful thoughts writing my verses ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Writing my verses Telling of things I recall Feeling them again ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
feeling them again feelings I hoped had passed on return in my dreams I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
return in my dreams fire of my younger days ignite me again |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
ignite me again please don't let that fire burn out makes me hot for you ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Makes me hot for you Thinking of us together As it might have been Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
as it might have been could have been good or ugly we will never know ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
we will never know of the things we never knew maybe I am wrong |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
maybe I am wrong hope it will all be okay in some future day ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
In some future day Things will be more clear to you Wisdom comes with age Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
wisdom comes with age you just need patience that's all and never give up ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
And never give up Set your course and follow it To her port of dreams Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
to her port of dreams it is there waiting for you take it as it is ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
take it as it is it's most pleasing and smells sweet I think you'll like it I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I think you'll like it what a wonderful delight oh I'll jump right in ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
oh I'll jump right in into the icy waters baubles turning blue |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Baubles turning blue When you're at a loss for words Metaphors will do Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
metaphors will do when you want to hide something from unknowing eyes ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
from unknowing eyes comes knowledge which makes you wise appreciate me I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
appreciate me and give me all of your love you have all of me ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You have all of me In all our tender moments Forever in love ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
forever in love a promise within your poem my own for all time I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
my own for all time she faithfully promised me she left yesterday ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
she left yesterday a note told of her new love a man with money One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A man with money Can take himself where he wants To find what he wants ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
to find what he wants a man must think long and hard what he really needs ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
What he really wants control over his sandwiched life, blows out at day's end. |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
What he really needs Could never take center stage resting behind curtains |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
resting behind curtains dead folks never show their face when they have no head I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
When they have no head They ride alone on horseback In Sleepy Hollow Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
in sleepy hollow things are never as they seem take a look and see ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
take a look and see tell yourself that you know me in ways that you wish I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
in ways that you wish oh my oh me how you talk my wish is super ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
my wish is super you've made it invincible you've made it so good I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
You've made it so good You stirred the thick of me well Mysteries unfold Touch, but don't look |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
mysteries unfold of the tales we never told fiction from my mind |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
fiction from my mind I still have reality and bless her for that ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
and bless her for that parrot feathers in her hat but how she could squawk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
but how she could squawk her voice drowned out everything hurtful and angry ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Hurtful and angry Feelings left unattended Words lost in the dark Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
words lost in the dark unwritten letters yearning for my love I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
yearning for my love mysterious and lovely the lady in white ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
the lady in white queen of her king, knights and pawns rules her board with fear |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
rules her board with fear monopoly is her game hotels are her reign I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
hotels are her reign champagne bubbles in her room stockings black and sheer |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
stockings black and sheer sexy attire for lady hope to make a score ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
hope to make a score I'm hammering on her door my knuckles now raw |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
My knuckles now raw Whittled clean down to the bone Blood prints on his jaw Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
blood prints on his jaw and scrubbed clean by his shower another new day ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
another new day but my thoughts remain the same so much to ponder I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
so much to ponder the world drifts into dark sleep lost within nightmares |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
lost within nightmares and scream awake at midnight clenching pure white sheets ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
clenching pure white sheets white knuckled orgasmic rush Squeaky old bed springs I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
squeaky old bed springs Billy with a can of oil quiets the dark nights One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
quiets the dark nights two glasses of wine is all for some calming peace ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
for some calming peace I'll see your two wine glasses and raise you three beers |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
and raise you three beers put in a house in the woods then Goldilocks comes. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Then Goldilocks comes A tale of her and a wolf Lunching on Grandma Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
lunching on grandma a spry and sixty-year treat nothing like aged meat ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
nothing like aged meat picking my teeth clean of it lace found in my stool I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
lace found in my stool I've heard stories about it remembering her ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
remembering her a lace only for mothers sorry I meant face |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Sorry I meant face It's all about the music Paying the piper Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
paying the piper head bowed thinking of the rest too late to take back ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
too late to take back swallowing my sad feelings she left me again One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
She left me again I had hoped she wouldn't go Her train left at five Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
her train left at five I made sure she was on it .38 special ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
.38 Special hollow point just like his heart exit wound was large I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Exit wound was large A straw would fill the entry Blew his brains clean out ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
blew his brains clean out dead before he hit the floor every one cheered ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
every one cheered listening to them all was weird a beard in my ear One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
a beard in my ear a beard that is just too close lose it or lose me I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
lose it or lose me be sure to make the right choice choose the breadwinner One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
choose the breadwinner so much depends upon this you know you have won ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You know you have won When you're the one still standing To catch the roses ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
to catch the roses you need to grab them with care run fast as you can I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Run fast as you can Let no one catch up to you 'Til you reach the end ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
'Til you reach the end Keep doing all that you do Go out with a bang Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Go out with a bang Tear the cover off the ball Damn the torpedoes ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
damn the torpedoes they are loaded with blank shells its everyone's fight ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
its everyone's fight why are women always right throw in the towel |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Throw in the towel Losing just one of your fights Beats losing your life Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
beats losing your life turn around put up your dukes kickass time is now . . . Sorry about the language, if I could have removed it I would have, never thought I would be apologizing about something so insignificant as "kickass." ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-29-2016 11:14 PM).] |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Kickass time is now South for you is six feet down For screwin' my gal ...just bein' Bluesy |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
For screwin' my gal you aint no longer my pal was she worth it fool |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
was she worth it fool was all her glitter just fake how do you feel now ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
how do you feel now now that you've tasted her wares yanking the plumbing One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
yanking the plumbing she looked up at me and grinned and said should I stop ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
and said should I stop I could be relieved in time before I arrive One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Before I arrive She makes all preparations For we two lovers Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
for we two lovers its too bad she is married playing with danger ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Playing with danger Is half the organ music For many women Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
for many women happy if blood spills for them overcome with joy ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-02-2016 08:34 PM).] |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
overcome with joy thinking of a poem I read very sexy poem One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
very sexy poem overjoyed you liked it now for the encore ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
now for the encore into character once more curtain-call answered I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thought joy was pronounced jo-ye After checking it out I find you are correct. I apologize. Don't know why you didn't email me instead of showing my ignorance to the world. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-05-2016 06:35 PM).] |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
joy to the world (4 syllables) once a year talking of peace lies and untruths prevailing One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Boomer! you are right I commented on your thoughts where my poem was once ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-05-2016 05:05 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry again. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Where my poem was once Cupped inside her tender hands Has fallen from grace Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
has fallen from grace wasn't supposed to happen wish to bring it back ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
wish to bring it back those naughty things in the park flashing in my mac |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
flashing in my mac wearing only a raincoat mickey mouse pasties I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
mickey mouse pasties goofy house slippers and robe all dressed up for me ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
all dressed up for me to the nines for our first date big mac's under glass One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
big mac's under glass a meal fit for kings and queens castle-wide doorways I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Castle-wide doorways For all your wide-ride girlfriends Love will find a way Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
love will find a way it's either that or lose it oh isn't love grand ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Oh isn't love grand It comes it goes and it stays Spin the wheel of love Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
spin the wheel of love watch it go round and around when it stops you smile ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
When it stops you smile Hopefully she's smiling too A mutual thing Touch, but don't look |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A mutual thing You and I together babe No one else shall know Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
no one else shall know it is between you and I hope you're not a fink ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
hope you're not a fink one that uses too much ink to write small white lies One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
To write small white lies A deception has no size Nor any color Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
nor any color unless you are colorblind and see all as one ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
And see all as one A way to view perfect peace Within looking out Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
within looking out that's one way of doing it don't make a mistake ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
within looking out but your viewpoint is the view from the other side |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
don't make a mistake like the little one just then pipped by a minute |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
pipped by a minute an embarrassing mistake good for a chuckle One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
good for a chuckle the laughs were always on me 'til my barrel smoked One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
'Til my barrel smoked My pistol had no cancer You know cancer kills Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
you know cancer kills perhaps it could kill disease for a better world |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
for a better world all we need is compassion try it on for size ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
try it on for size said Prince Charming with a smile brushing her ankle |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Brushing her ankle Slipping on a crystal shoe Thoughts becoming moist Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
thoughts becoming moist as I look at you and smile I'm fantasizing ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I'm fantasizing Imagination amuck All I need is her ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
all I need is her had her but turned out all wrong let's try it again ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Let's try it again Battery cable was loose Can't be late for work Touch, but don't look |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Can't be late for work Need to make bucks for Christmas Spread a little joy Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
spread a little joy put on that smile be happy it is contagious ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
It is contagious Works its way under your skin Like a bad poem ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
like a bad poem I have been accused of that rightly so sometimes ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Rightly so sometimes Other times we can't agree Yet we remain pals Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
yet we remain pals there is a depth between us not by happenstance ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Not by happenstance Did all Santa's work get done He had many elves Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
He had many elves To wed his many elvettes Happy little ones Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
happy little ones ducks trying to cross the street wish you lots of luck ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Wish you lots of luck Its a treacherous journey Follow beaten path Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
follow beaten path search for the bread crumbs she drops smelling her perfume ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Smelling her perfume From around her lovely neck Heading south from there Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
heading south from there a dangerous way to go if you leave from here One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
If you leave from here You'll find it's the shortest path To her place in time Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
to her place in time hope Santa don't forget her she has his present ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
she has his present he has all her yesterdays they have their future One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
they have their future doesn't get better than this or so they all say ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
or so they all say or so most of them will say one can't be too sure One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
one can't be too sure you have to have keen eyesight to tell that from this ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
To tell that from this Give both a distinctive name Like Man and Woman Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
like man and woman that then is the difference now its c'est la vie ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
now its c'est la vie let the times blow with the wind death may welcome me One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
death may welcome me into the blue horizon eh maybe below ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Eh maybe below Zero was her bottom line Hard to warm up to ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
hard to warm up to wine could not loosen her tongue she must have been dead One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
she must have been dead though she plays that game a lot 'til I light the fire ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Till I light the fire She sways heavy left and right Staring at the logs |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Til I light the fire She sways heavy left and right Staring at the logs |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
staring at the logs chopped all day to make that pile never worked so hard ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
never worked so hard fixing all she had broken cords of ricked hearts One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Cords of ricked hearts Warming the edge of Winter Without leaving home ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
without leaving home our family totaled nine my bedridden wife One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
my bedridden wife a look of satisfaction covering her face ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Covering her face Could not hide the rest of her Such a splendid view ...just bein' Bluesy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Such a splendid view As mountain dips to lake's edge Quenching reflection. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Such a splendid view As mountain dips to lake's edge Quenching reflection. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Quenching reflection Her face upon the waters Flowing through my mind ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
flowing through my mind are the dreams of yesterday shocked I'm still alive ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Shocked I'm still alive Said the Frankenstein monster Electrical thrills ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
electrical thrills throughout my demented soul guess I'll frighten kids ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
guess I'll frighten kids as an evil Santa Claus throw reindeer dung balls One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Throw reindeer dung balls Squaring off with Santa's elves Without approval ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
without approval from friends and lovers alike I went my own way ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
I went my own way but still got lost in the woods shared gram's lunch with wolf ***Happy New Year!*** I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Shared gram's lunch with wolf Basket full of temptations A wolf can't deny ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a wolf can't deny what's right in front of his eyes he must check it out ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
He must check it out She looked too good to be true Saddle bags and all ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
saddle bags and all those saddle bags wet his lips he was a goner ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
he was a goner spent every last dime he had tent preacher's tithe bowl I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Tent preacher's tithe bowl Passes by my eager hands Skim a dime for Sis Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
skim a dime for sis hope I will be forgiven she has a sweet tooth ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
She has a sweet tooth So I played it to the max To get what she has ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
to get what she has more honey less vinegar for sure the best way I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
For sure the best way Follow the narrow path home Fewer shoulders bump ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
fewer shoulders bump fighting the maddening crowd on your way to work ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
on your way to work don't pick up a hitchhiker you may not make it One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
you may not make it you're going to need some help call for a poet I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
call for a poet when you're fighting writers block don't forget to write One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Don't forget to write For you I've always an ear Love will not fail you ...just bein' Bluesy |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
love will not fail you but it just might impale you if you fall on it I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
if you fall on it you'll have to have it removed better drop your your drawers One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Better drop your drawers Look for that which you have lost Now you know the cost ...just bein' Bluesy |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Now you know the cost, will you do it anyway? Don't let it fool you! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...please! |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
don't let it fool you it's not always as it seems take a second look I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
take a second look maybe you'll like what you see better than before One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
better than before is always an improvement over what once was ...just bein' Bluesy |
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