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Open Poetry #49

'X' Is More Than A Mark

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-17 07:18 AM

languishing in the tropics
relieved of all account
looks like I finally earned it
at the expense of my sanity

one too many sorties,
and a failed four-way flasher
it could have been the anti-coll
or the blue directed taxi

Amelia, I counted on you,
and you never let me down...
until now

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-02-17 09:12 AM

I didn't hit on all cylinders with this one. I caught the refenences and missed the big pictures. Duh

. A little enlightening plz?

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2014-02-17 09:51 AM

I don't think I've ever written with the intent to be universal. Even if I tried, it's likely I would fail miserably. I know that there is poetry relative for some, but not everyone and that includes myself as well.

I greatly appreciate your reading over this Lori and anyone else that stops by.

...just bein' Bluesy

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