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Open Poetry #49

In Awe of What We Writ

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-02-15 08:04 AM

eternity . . . a figure of speech
is merely now
visualize the moment bereft of passion
seeing it apart from the concept
of a point in time
to eat away more of us than we would like

just know this
poetry is genuine
poetry R us
there is a special place
upon the isle of loveliness
and there . . .
lies proof regarding
the phenomenon of our lines

©February 14, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-02-15 08:50 AM

'Tis an honorable pursuit well acknowledged.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-15 11:29 AM

M'Lord you grace us with the generosity of your kind words. May God bless you and keep you.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-02-15 11:30 AM

Thank you Lori.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2014-02-15 11:44 AM

the entire 'double-post-modern' techno-addicted 'Runaway American Dream' seems rather "bereft of passion" to me !

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2014-02-15 01:13 PM

Thanks Bruce.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2014-02-17 05:35 AM

there is a special place
upon the isle of loveliness

Well said, dear Jerry, and inspiring.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2014-02-17 05:45 AM

Hello Margherita, and thank you for spending some time in my world.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

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