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Open Poetry #49

My Goddess Gown

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-11-23 03:56 PM

Getting out
my goddess gown.
Languishing in my longing,
slipping into my supple
thoughts of you.
Wearing your words
like lipstick and perfume
in pleasured places.
Dancing your invitations
into my breathless.
Twirling the tantalizing
on the tip of my tongue.

LGR©2/21/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-11-23 04:15 PM

"thoughts of you.
Wearing your words"

Awww . . . That just says about everything . . . "my goddess gown" . . . That says the rest . . . Wonderfully done . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

2 posted 2015-11-23 06:55 PM

quote:
"Wearing your words
like lipstick"

Quite a compliment Miss Lori. Cheers for "languishing".

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2015-11-24 08:53 PM

Aw, Lori, you're so good at painting words..my fav below
"
Wearing your words
like lipstick and perfume
in pleasured places.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2015-11-24 10:08 PM

Aw, loved it . . . but, but, where's the photo to go with the words??

j.

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