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Open Poetry #49

A Chord For My Little One

Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

0 posted 2015-11-20 04:13 AM

Winds carry her name
Pall-bearers of my lost love
And I left to pray

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-11-20 05:27 AM

Oooh! Beautiful . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2015-11-20 05:52 AM

oh Boomer!
Ah, right to the heart...hard! Eyes welling here. ~L

Pete_W
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Posts 185
Scotland (UK)

3 posted 2015-11-20 03:26 PM

Great little poem

Thanks
Pete

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2015-11-22 06:44 AM

This gave me an inner tremor, it's such an ache filled haiku.

Beautiful in its melancholy.

Margherita

rainyday
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Posts 304
Heartland USA

5 posted 2015-11-22 05:42 PM

Boomer, Powerful & yet delicate Haiku.
Well done Poet..

rainyday J

Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

6 posted 2015-11-24 06:36 PM

Thank you Jerry and Lori for your warm, sensitive replies.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

7 posted 2015-11-24 06:37 PM

Thanks PeteW for your nice reply.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

8 posted 2015-11-24 06:38 PM

Thank you Margherita for looking in as you do.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Boomer Styles
Member

since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

9 posted 2015-11-24 06:42 PM

Thanks to you rainyday for relating two important aspects.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

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