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Open Poetry #49

Eden before the fall

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-11-24 10:46 AM

I dream of Eden when time first began
a universe so vast and endless
with only the simplest elements of earth and sky
a sanctuary never receding like the end of a rainbow

a turquoise dawn awakes me
light spills through in shafts of multicolor
waters a mirror reflecting a cerulean silk sky
grasses are lacquered with early morning dew

I walk around in dreamy euphoria
pure air scented in mint and honeyed liqueur
flame trees bright as a convention of cardinals
an intense sense of peace prevails

A Creator has laid out a multilayered masterpiece
expectation of immortality is not presumptuous
uncertainty of life will not haunt me in the night
no poison has touched the apple garden.

@jjote 11242015

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

1 posted 2015-11-24 02:16 PM

quote:
"expectation of immortality is not presumptuous"

...if not a foregone conclusion.

Wonderful in its ambiance Miss jjote. A clear, calm, and peaceful meditation.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2015-11-24 10:10 PM

Wonderful thoughts, my friend - wouldn't mind going back and trying it on myself..

enjoyed

j.

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