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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Wintry 'Haikoids': not by choice I hide in myself Wintry seclusion morning mist painting this dream of Autumn passing a love-blossom memory floats the deep pool of loneliness love reflects in her eyes___ only a dream only two things worth remembering I loved you and Haiku --- b. e. adams (11/15/2015) an extended "Indian Summer" blew away in the teeth of a N.W. wind and arctic air mass 'round these parts ... |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Very nice generally, but the last one blew me away! It's perfection. smiles, Constance |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Such concise and memorable words you have strung together, Bruce . . . Simple and amazingly vibrant! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautifully crafted and inspiring, dear Bruce! Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks so much ... to each of you! The months of Nov. and Feb. and the so-called "Holiday Season" in America seem for me like they are always right out of Anton Chekhov's descriptions of bleakest Winter. I have to be really careful that my 'writes' don't become way too 'dark' during these times each year in particular. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
shdpoet, Felt as if each were framed in fresh fallen snow, but yet each had the tender warmth of a crackling fire. Enjoyed.. rainyday J |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, "rainyday" ! |
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