Open Poetry #49 |
Taking charge |
jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I shall not sit on a corner reading tea leaves today if I've been burned, then I haven't learned a lesson Rather, I shall ride a roller coaster, spin a roulette wheel trip over all barriers. Now is not the time for timidity and hubris I shall be glitzy and brash go up front and confrontational Armed only with a predatory gleam letting discretion off its leash I shall tell him his is the only music that makes me dance. Sagittarius is boldness surfing a world of possibilities tweaks life to surrender to love if for a day. @jjote 11132015 [This message has been edited by jjote (11-14-2015 08:49 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your determination has surged from the very core of your heart, dear Josefina. I love this, it is powerful and as it is also passionate, it is even contagious! Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, get out of that corner, jjote, and strut your stuff . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
hehe, just kidding, but thanks both of you |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Seize the day, good advice, enjoyed reading this. Thanks Pete |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
the anticipation built up quickly, with every line the pace was faster, made me sit up straight in the end. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks Pete and Shali...appreciate your comments |
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