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Swamp Fog |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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i]. . .Oooh! What is lurking inside that thick swamp fog on this Halloween night?. . .[/i] <><><><><><> swamp fog dense seeps under the door disturbs no one in the house except her she senses rather than sees a presence leaves her bed seeks out her desire soundlessly she walks down the stairs to confront destiny in the form of a rugged, not quite tamed Swampman she stands before him knows his intention not the first meeting 'tween the two he smiles a crooked smile she sits on a stair step shivers though it is quite warm her shivering is wondering anticipation of his salacious kiss hovering over her lithe form as his rough hands softly strums her she senses something not the same this tonight somewhere in her psyche she understands he will take her further than ever even into life unused scabrously, with demonic desire incisors quickly penetrate her neck's downy softness he drank deeply ©October 16, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-31-2015 11:59 PM).] |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Wow! Where this one ended up caught me way by surprise! I thought it was going to have some cool 'Swamp music'! You know, like Tony Joe White throating out 'Polk Salad Annie' or sumpin' like that! I did get into that "incisor" scene though JerryPat. That was 'throaty' enough for me.  Great stuff! 88's atcha friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Naw, You were disappointed, Ticklefingers. Sorry to you and Tony Jo White were disappointed. I'm just a rude crude sometimes poet. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-01-2015 12:01 AM).] |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Say what you like JerryPat, quote:...this 'ol picker 'n grinner thinks you're a 'top-shelf Masta of Wordplayin'! So there! Whaddya gonna do 'bout it Southern Lou? Bust me for a 'Felony' or a 'Misdemeanor'? Take this! 8888888888888888888888888888888's!  She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'll say nothing else. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
JP, Kept me on the edge of my seat.. enjoyed your swamp fog tale. rainyday J |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your wonderful thoughts, thank you, rainyday J . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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