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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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Come into my chamber I shall color the music low chill the wine perfect to taste and for our light catch stray moonbeams flirting in through a window place a candle or two scented with citronella to intoxicate us. The drumbeats in my heart pound impatiently my fingers like a violin rod flex slowly for the opening chords a hush falls over my senses. Maestro, your orchestra is ready. I am your instruments, you have the power to possess me, hold me willing captive. At the wave of your hand we shall play our symphony. @jjote 11142015 |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
The music becomes you my dear and your embellishments are indeed as you say, "intoxicating". My general way of thinking is if you can write it, you can experience it. We use our better judgment of course to discern the more acceptable actions This is the primary reason so many poets are lonely souls searching for an understanding ear. Beautifully crafted with the warmest emotions j. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, dear Josefina, you were passionately inspired here. I love it! Mr. Martini's comment is also enlightening "if you can write it you can experience it", of course sometimes it's the other way around, but still ... have you read his poems? Great job! Love, Margherita  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
All I can do is tap the living podium with my baton and guide you, the orchestra , toward your grande finale! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
thanks Mr. M, Margherita and Jerry for dropping by to read. I appreciate very much and value your comments. |
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