Not All Needles Follow A Groove

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Open Poetry #49

Not All Needles Follow A Groove

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-11-04 02:13 AM

parting the seas under surrealistic clouds
they heed the silence of the crowds

their dance begins,their sway is still
now its only time they fill

cold grey skies loom overhead
menacing lovers upon the bed

the flesh that's bared in silhouette
has its passions, its loves, and yet...

desires to move across the floor
and dance for Dali
...evermore

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-11-04 06:34 AM

TF,
Nice flow and rhyme and great images! Sweet poem you got here! I like it a lot!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-11-04 08:04 AM

Love your style . . . Love your groove . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

3 posted 2015-11-04 01:04 PM

Many thanks your comments JerryPat and Miss Lori!

88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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