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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2015-10-30 03:09 PM





the mirror laughs
reflecting
the ashes of tomorrow...


CG

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latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
1 posted 2015-10-30 06:12 PM


Understanding this one.jo
Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana
2 posted 2015-10-31 03:39 AM


A mirror like that is telling you something.

                 ...Play it safe, don't go to work tomorrow.


88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2015-10-31 06:32 AM


excellently done snippet of truth !

I'm always fond of reading and doing 'pennings' featuring mirrors ...

In my mirror
by moonlight
my father
my son


         Lost Love

In this empty-midnight
     room
that she has left forever,
an old mirror hangs
reflecting nothing
but moonlight, loss,
and eternity.

          ---  b. e. adams jr.


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2015-11-09 08:06 PM


nice writing...james
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
5 posted 2015-11-09 09:40 PM


this is superbe, a Mirror to be "listened" ,


thanks for sharing


yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2015-11-10 05:10 PM


... and beyond that laughter, the mirror will reflect Light, but you will not see it, because you will BE it ...

Very impressive poem, it's haunting. And thought provoking.

Margherita  

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2016-02-25 05:56 AM


Enjoyed this one.
              Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
8 posted 2016-02-25 10:49 AM


Eh . . . More like the mirror weeps

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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