Open Poetry #49 |
Reflection |
CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
the mirror laughs reflecting the ashes of tomorrow... CG |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Understanding this one.jo |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
A mirror like that is telling you something. ...Play it safe, don't go to work tomorrow. 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellently done snippet of truth ! I'm always fond of reading and doing 'pennings' featuring mirrors ... In my mirror by moonlight my father my son Lost Love In this empty-midnight room that she has left forever, an old mirror hangs reflecting nothing but moonlight, loss, and eternity. --- b. e. adams jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is superbe, a Mirror to be "listened" , thanks for sharing yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... and beyond that laughter, the mirror will reflect Light, but you will not see it, because you will BE it ... Very impressive poem, it's haunting. And thought provoking. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this one. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . More like the mirror weeps ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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