Remembering You And I At The Cabin

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Open Poetry #49

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-10-26 11:44 PM

Soft swaying firelight
Melting shadows on the wall
Secrets to recall

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-10-27 06:19 AM

Just the right amount for ambiance and mood without TMI. Still you say it all. Very romantically said. ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-10-27 02:41 PM

When it is said so directly as have you, nothing is better than those shadows and memories.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2015-10-27 03:17 PM

Yeah, let's hear it for cabins, and wood burning scents - - - and exposure of secrets...

nice...

j.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2015-10-28 08:21 PM

Nice words enjoyed,jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2015-11-02 05:34 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

6 posted 2015-11-02 07:25 PM

Thank you so much everyone!

88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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