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Open Poetry #49

3 Senryu - #1

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-08-31 09:56 AM

wineglass in my hand
I retire to window ledge
far from party crowd.

faint polite laughter
bane drunken conversations
will not touch me here.

a lone gorgeous man
relentless eyes pursue me
distance keeps me safe.

@jjote 0831/2015

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-08-31 10:55 AM

Nice senryu's jjote . . . The last one . . . That gorgeous man who is scoping you . . . Are you certain you want to be safe.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2015-09-03 12:29 PM

enjoyed reading...james

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2015-09-03 06:20 PM

very nice...i could picture it in mind

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2015-09-03 07:01 PM

enjoyed, Nice story I could picture you standing there, wondering. jo

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2015-09-03 10:41 PM

thanks dear visitors Charisma,James and Jo. I welcome your words

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