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Open Poetry #49

Haiku - #3

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-09-03 11:45 AM

lightning stabs the sky
wind howls and whips dead branches
trees mute storm watchers.

waves crash against shore
thunder threatening darkness
whiplash from sky gods.

breakers slap wet sands
sounding monstrous applause of
nature's savagery.

@jjote 0903/2015

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-09-03 11:59 AM

Eh . . . I can picture these haiku's within my mind, you have so completely given us a thunderous overview.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2015-09-03 12:16 PM

thanks, it's always raining here at my part of the world right now where I am on vacation, it's affecting my writing.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2015-09-03 05:57 PM

beautiful !

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2015-09-03 07:03 PM

Enjoyed: It has rained almost daily here in Florida. August seems to be the big month for rain which is good as here as well as the Northern Western States usually sees some bad fires about this time. JO

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2015-09-03 10:38 PM

Thanks Charisma & Jo for the visit.

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