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jjote
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0 posted 2015-09-03 11:38 AM

visions of himself
a life of broken fragments
palette toned sepia.

a sense of menace
depresses anticlimax
master of his moods.

he realizes
not all quests are quixotic
some are doomed to fail.


@jjote 0903/2015
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-09-03 11:57 AM

Dark theme to these senryu's, and I like dark themes, really got off on the last one.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
jjote
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2 posted 2015-09-03 12:18 PM

thanks again Jerry..just practicing
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2015-09-03 09:00 PM

very nice...james
jjote
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4 posted 2015-09-03 10:44 PM

thanks James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2015-09-04 05:56 AM

Well done here.  Paints a vivid picture. ~L
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