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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2014-02-12 04:38 AM

Saturday evening to Manaus in 2001,
It's midnight in Amazonia,
Lost fruits,
We have just landed in the unknown,
The young people party in streets,
We do not live here as somewhere else
Our small van leads us to a hotel,
To celebrate our arrival,
In a bus stop, a girl
Raise her T-shirt and shows her breasts,
The civilization does not miss me.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-02-12 06:08 AM

Even the flasher seems romantic.

Nostalgia reigns anytime it wants to.

Cool.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-12 06:14 AM

Yann
Very discriptive! love the last line!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-02-12 07:07 AM

Sounds Mardi Gras like.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2014-02-12 11:07 AM

Loved this my friend...felt like I was walking in your shoes ... excellent!

j.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2014-02-12 09:34 PM

nice...James

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2014-02-13 12:06 PM

sometimes, civilization, does get hard to miss

this really impressed me my friend

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2014-02-13 12:30 PM

thanks lori for the kind comment, o always try to have a "punchline" in a poem which could be nothing more than descriptive

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2014-02-13 12:31 PM

thanks BS for the accurate comment, it is nice reading
yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2014-02-13 12:32 PM

thanks Jerry, i love mardi gras,really more american now than french

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2014-02-13 12:33 PM

thanks jewsley, it is a so warm and cute comment

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2014-02-13 12:34 PM

thanks james

yann

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