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Open Poetry #49

Sabula Moon

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-07 07:55 PM

Sabula moon

your tail skims
the surface
of the waters
like a ribbon of silk

you shyly come close
with a splash
of the big rivers breaker

ah!

tickle my feet Sabula moon
tickle my lovers' heart

tell her I'm here with you, Sabula moon

tell her I'm coming home soon,
following your ribbon of silk

tell her Sabula moon,
that I cannot see her
without you

N_i_C_o_L_E
Junior Member

since 2008-05-01

Posts 11
North Carolina

1 posted 2014-02-07 10:16 PM

I feel such serenity here, bittersweet serenity. It's beautiful. Thank you, Blues.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2014-02-07 10:31 PM

This one just glides. Very smoothe. Enjoyed.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2014-02-08 07:58 AM

Sabula huh? Love that name. love this poem. He is right, it has flow...It is slick, it is sweet!

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2014-02-09 09:43 PM

Sabula is a small island town, Iowa's only island within the Mississippi. It was there that 'Sabula Moon' was written.

Five hours later I was home.

Thanks for all the reads.

Regards from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2014-02-12 09:33 PM

very nice...James

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2014-02-12 11:52 PM

what a quality piece..

"tell her I'm coming home soon,
following your ribbon of silk"

that is just so becoming..

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2014-02-13 12:37 PM

hello bluesy socrateaser, this is so lovely, the moon is a great opportunity for dreaming and poetry, your poem has a charming delicacy that inspired me a lot,

have a nice day

yann

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