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MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
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Lancashire England

0 posted 2015-06-08 11:01 AM



FLOWERS I SAID

Flowers, I said
What flowers, she said
In the hall, I said
Oh those, she said
Oh those I thought
Could you not find a vase, she said
I don't know where it is, I said
Well you wouldn't, she said
Don't respond I thought
Well, she said
Well what, I said
You don't do you, she said
Don't what, I said
Know where they are, she said
"They", I thought
Well do you, she said
No, I said
Just as I thought, she said
Flowers, just flowers, I thought.


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-06-08 11:13 AM


WoW! I got dizzy trying to stay with this one, Michael. Heh.Heh

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

MICHELMAS
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2 posted 2015-06-08 11:21 AM


Thanks Jerry
and another thought, I expect that there are far more empty vases than full ones

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2015-06-08 12:42 PM


Yep, you gotta pernt. (point)

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2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2015-06-09 02:13 AM


very fine penning, let's talk about flowers there is a lot to say


yann

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