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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az 
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Leaves fall not taking aim Trees shed what they hope to gain Skeletal limbs grope for light rain Sit stripped! Preform your reflection, backwards! Forget regret Reset your intellect |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Remarkably deep write in so few lines! "Trees shed what they hope to gain" ~Great hushing ponder with this, 'tis m'fav line. "Sit stripped! .." ~And fits of grin to this one, I imagine a tree en-sulk. lol! Great verse, enjoyed! ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. Deep is the word here and I get the message big time, because i have been in the business of doing exactly what your words said to do . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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