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Open Poetry #49

Words from the heart.

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

0 posted 2015-05-19 04:02 PM

It's the moment before you speak,
but after your eyes meet.
Saw you looking,
you caught me looking back smiling.
How embarrassing.

Laughting after talking late at night.
Knowing everything was just right.
My superman, my everything.
Calling you anytime with anything.
Didn't have a reason to fight.

You are my love story in disguise.
My happily ever after.
The beat my heart jumps to.
These words I can't fit in every line.
Your my guy.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-05-19 04:15 PM

When he reads this he will bust the buttons on his shirt as a result of the pride he is feeling. Beautiful thoughts from you to your guy!

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2015-05-19 05:00 PM

Yep, JJT, Jerry is right, what a lovely tribute indeed

enjoyed!
~d

"...But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go...
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2015-05-20 12:42 PM

Sweet and loving. *perfect

Michael

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2015-05-22 10:21 PM

nice...james

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2015-05-23 12:31 PM

sweet and nice declaration

yann

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

6 posted 2015-05-24 10:21 AM

Thanks to you all! I appreciate the feedback and you all taking time to read my work!

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