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May Of The Morning
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May Of The Morning |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror 
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May of the morning... Rises to become my sun Window-box flowers sing to your smile That gives light to their petals And life to their delicate leaves Rooms filled with airs about you A gift that transcends the time That I beg to spend close by you Now that I've found you again May of the evening... Glows in radiance as my lovers' moon Tides move quietly from the shore Whispering her name on gentle breakers Her silvery lace flows with southern compliments As she fills my spirit and refreshes my soul Long will be the night she promises And we two to know it's pleasures 'Til the sun wakes the sleeping flowers once again |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Blusey! This is great! Nothig like a lover's poem first thing in the morning to get the gray matter going. This just oozes warm images and emotions. Beautifully done. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I couldn't agree more with Lori. This is a delicate and very, very warm poem of love. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, the lovely hope this final line imbues: "'Til the sun wakes the sleeping flowers once again" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Many thanks to each of you for your kind responses. Regards to all from Bluesy ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...James |
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