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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-01-30 09:09 AM

Bells of the poet
chime in the intemim

and locked within
the frozen prism
lives an ensemble of purple
amongst the others -

colors connected at the midway
waiting for the great thaw
of liberation

of icicle into liquid
letting the rainbow stream

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-01-30 09:30 AM

Excellent poetry, Emma. The melting icicle is a great metaphor for finally getting over the pain, as is . . .

quote:
waiting for the great thaw
of liberation

Very moving poem this morning.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2014-01-30 10:37 AM

Whooohoooo....your poem made me melt...seriously.

Lovely as ever, Emma.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2014-01-30 07:41 PM

did you mean interim in that first stanza? I found intemim on the internet, it has to do with a report of sorts.

I just want help when I reread this if it's the latter.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2014-01-30 07:59 PM

Beautiful!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2014-01-31 09:17 AM

quote:
and locked within
the frozen prism
lives an ensemble of purple

Ahh, how beautiful this is, dear EmmaRose!

Margherita

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2014-01-31 09:31 PM

frozen color dripping one shade at a time..

that's glorious

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2014-02-01 11:10 AM

this is quite perfect in echo of the nature beauty, such graceful images and delicate words,

thanks a lot

yann

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2014-02-01 09:08 PM

Mucho enjoyed this ...

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2014-02-02 09:26 AM

Way cool! Too Cool!

Lori

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2014-02-06 07:16 PM

Great write!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2014-02-08 06:13 PM

enjoyed...James

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