Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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2014-02-06
09:56 PM
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My screen door creaked as I walked out front
Looking for my cat like I do every morning A note in the sky made my eyes turn scarlet Toward the east where sun breaks day The ink on the blue was written in red And it made me think of my youngest son Jared I walked in the house and my cat followed suit I nudged on my camera and it opened an eye I pointed it toward the blush of the breeze And stole this momentary art of reflection I can hear the sabers as they rattle in the distance Through the palm tree on my neighbor’s green lawn The drum beats are pounding their chests ever louder A red line of blood, has been drawn in the sand It’s easy to rush to a fight when you’re youthful I learned that by being one of six brothers You mess with a sibling You mess, with them all But patience will always, be the flip side of fear And mankind, is often not, very so This sunrise, I looked up and read, the new page That sailors like my son should all take warning It’s hitting me now, what he decided, to do As the days go on we all, must grow up I just wish that this damn world
Somehow, would too love, dad
from left to right: My sons Richie, Ryan, and Jared about 20 years ago
at my son, Jared's, Naval Basic Training Graduation last year.. my other son, Ryan, on the right
my son, Jared, some months ago..
love, dad
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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
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2014-02-06
10:14 PM
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Heartfelt poem and Lovely family, Rich. Enjoyed. Ida
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Richy
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2014-02-06
10:17 PM
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thank you Ida..
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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
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2014-02-06
10:58 PM
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Love it! Enjoyed this glimpse into your life, Richy. I can tell you are one proud papa....as you should be.
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2014-02-06
11:01 PM
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Way to go Richy! Way to be a Dad! Sweet Poem.
Lori
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Richy
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2014-02-06
11:14 PM
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thank you Lori Blue, yes very proud for sure.. thanks for, being there, to share the glimpse..
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Richy
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2014-02-06
11:18 PM
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thanks so much Lori G..
yes, being a dad, defines me..
my kids are the most important poem ive ever written
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latearrival
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Florida
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2014-02-06
11:21 PM
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Yes indeed, loved seeing your boys and little Jared with his USA shirt while very young. love to you all. jo
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Richy
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2014-02-06
11:24 PM
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haha thanks jo..
yes i noticed that too
blessings to you as well
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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2014-02-08
06:16 PM
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very nice...James
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